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Love, Above All - My Spirit

Dejected on my bed this morn, I lay while contemplating,
what seems to be a day to face, I’m really quite unwilling
The peaceful place that used to be for me was so inspiring,
has come to be now tainted with such hatred and despising.

I used to get up from my bed an hour early to see,
to share what’s new, to grow, to live, to love more perfectly.
Each new day that unfolds with friends who greet excitedly,
felt like I’ve touched the heaven’s gates where I wanted to be.

The special word that’s meant to love has come to be vitriolic,
what used to be a happy place has now been melancholic.
Why can’t we just forget our pride, a soul that’s embryonic?
An open heart and mind will help lower blood’s diastolic.

What good is it if we can talk to ad infinitum?
When all the others think an adder fills our heart and cranium.
Will wounded hearts be even healed with simply an erratum?
When people can no longer see which is our mouth or rectum!

Our love for self and things should not be so that it replaces
respect for him, regard for her, a love that recognizes
each one's unique, no one’s above, this love’s the one that reaches
out with sincere humility, forgiveness, it amazes.


SHOW ME YOUR SPIRIT CONTEST
SPONSOR: FJ THOMAS
02 May 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Beaufort Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 11:50 AM
You got it! We all leave this world in the same way, so we might as well treat everything with the respect it deserves. It's funny that we sometimes talk about the same subjects but with only slightly different words and images. You are a kindred spirit. Have a wonderful day, and I hope your outlook is all good! We are certainly fortunate to be able to share our words like this.
Nunez Avatar
October 6, 2015 at 7:54 AM
Hi Duke! I'm really really sorry for such a late reply. I don't know how I could have missed your comment...HOw are you? I hope you're keeping well. will visit you in a bit. Hugs!
Haight Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 2:10 PM
Hi Kim, I've been away for 10 days, still catching up with PS! Congratulations on your fine win for your amazing poem so filled with inspiration and wisdom. Hugs, Sandra
Lindley Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 11:48 PM
I see this won in a contest, bravo. Love thyself or else you'll not know how to love others. At least thats what my mother told me so long ago.. GREAT WRITE MY FRIEND! A7
A   Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 1:20 PM
Kim, Congratulations on your win. Love LINDA
Allison Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 3:02 PM
dropping back with my congrats Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx
A  Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 1:57 PM
Kim, congratulations on your spirit win poem. SKAT love :)
Makama Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 8:27 AM
Sweet expressions from wonderful lines which are so liberal to disallow the message stay hidden. I love this poem and it is definitely a 7
Vaso Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 10:45 AM
I often read poems I like more than once! I find that sometimes when you come back, you read more deeply or see tihngs you didn't the first time! Hugs!
Vaso Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 10:38 AM
Wow, I just loved this one, truly inspiring , the last verse so beautiful!
Devnath  Avatar
May 7, 2015 at 1:21 PM
An excellent glittering gem in the form of this poem. Good luck in the contest my lovely friend. 7++, Loved always,bl
Atfield Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 3:04 PM
Telling my Dear . Hope it garners you another win !!!~ B. J. "A" 2
Lamoureux Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 8:04 AM
You have some great comments! I enjoyed rereading this piece.
Callus Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 7:12 AM
Love, understanding and forgiveness go hand in hand. We must never let pride stand in our way. I love how you express yourself so fluently. #7 Hope you are keeping well:) hugs // paul
Strauss Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 3:54 AM
Ate Kim ang galing! Nakakainspire naman :)
Bateman Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 2:07 PM
A superb write here Kim!! Best of Luck in the contest. Love's what makes the world go round for sure -- and it does indeed have many dimensions. A "7" and continued best wishes from me!! Gary
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 9:50 PM
Kim, such spirit you got here... ;)!!! galing galing.. :)! ,me and nette meet yesterday I wish you there too.. :D! ~~olive eloisa :)!
Bordner Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 8:56 PM
Love should make us resilient, and amaze us with it's joy in sharing all the things that make hearts triumph. Find your strength in love Kim...J.A.B.
Dietrich Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 3:52 PM
great lines in that next to last stanza . made me almost chuckle. This is great how you wrote your feelings out. I think the judge should be impressed!
Pinet Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 10:04 AM
A poem offering reflection on the essence of being human and sharing feelings intrinsic to our species. Emile.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 8:20 AM
The addition of humor lightens the somber tone of the piece. Well expressed!
Manassian Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 8:17 AM
Profound write, Kim. Lots to dwell and absorb. Like Tim said....peace is at times transitory, but Paul does admonish us to do everything in our power to keep the bond of peace. Not always an easy thing to do. Thanks for visiting my work....Very sweet of you. Hugs
Andresen Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 7:17 AM
- Dear Kim, what beautiful poem infused with love, skill, sensation, wisdom - yes, this has it all! - (I've had an "almost free online" weekend ... glad I visited your poem today :) - I really enjoy this poem - a winning poem in my eyes, good luck! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ryerson Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 5:29 AM
WOW Kim...VERY good rhyming of hard to rhyme words, especially verse #4 and the LAST line of that verse is hilarious! Reminds me of the saying: 'He can't tell his ass from a hole-in-the-ground'...Great wisdom and insight mingled with sadness...I think you've got a winner here - Tim
Onclaud Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 3:14 PM
this is uplifting, kim... enjoyed the love!.. spill ink!.. huggs
Ellison Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 11:09 AM
Dear Kimmie, I don't visit often enough... this was such a well written piece from the heart! Sad! Love ya xxx
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