Love

hearts twinkle with love pale moonlight kisses the trees shadows meander embracing their silhouettes sweet whispers drift on the breeze

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Heidi Sands

Date: 9/18/2017 11:22:00 PM

This is so beautiful Joseph! :)

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 4/15/2017 1:04:00 PM

Congratulations, Joseph, a romantic tanka , you describe the setting well.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/15/2017 7:53:00 AM

You paint a lovely image with these few lines. Congrats on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2017 7:20:00 PM

oh yes, it was one of my favorites I saw this past week. BIG congrats on a deserved win, Joseph.

John Michaels

Date: 4/14/2017 5:12:00 AM

Wow! - great write. Very powerful imagery. Best of luck in the contest! Regards, John.

Robert Pettit

Date: 4/13/2017 5:50:00 PM

Five short lines that collectively convey a great meaning of the word.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/11/2017 1:33:00 PM

- An outstanding poem, Joseph - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2017 12:13:00 AM

WOW, a brilliant entry from you. If it is not on the list,I will be VERY surprised!! Excellent metaphors.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/10/2017 9:11:00 PM

Joseph, this is a very beautiful Tanka, the words flow so well!

Paul Callus

Date: 4/10/2017 11:08:00 AM

Love, kisses and sweet whispers are excellent ingredients for a romantic evening, Joseph! Well done! // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/10/2017 10:17:00 AM

A very romantic scene, Joseph. Your brush created a lovely image.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/10/2017 10:02:00 AM

Beautifully sweet, Joseph:)

Judy Ball

Date: 4/9/2017 9:38:00 AM

WoW! Beautifully done. Great emotion and such a romantic feel to it. Loved it. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB

Jan Allison

Date: 4/9/2017 7:38:00 AM

oh how beautiful and romantic are your lines Jospeh:-) love the imagery of the shadows meandering embracing their silhouettes:-) hugs Jan xx