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Love

Here is a place of mixed feelings, passions so high Manipulating judgements, so blind, can't exactly say why Such emotions so formidable, making you laugh even as you cry Veiling your views, covering your perceptions, Oh what of such dye A world of reality so fictitious, illusions so real, a land where hearts never die Abounding wealth of passions and sentimental, a course on how you try With achievements of yields in even seasons so dry With its first touch making the soul engulfed in infatuations like meat in a pie Affecting the mind, bringing such thoughts, telling the heart any possible lie Racing beats of the heart through thousands miles

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/24/2017 6:27:00 PM
i like the range of "events," and emotions here, including deep disappointments. I think u now strength, too, as u have encouraged others to see it in themselves. Thanks for this offering, AD
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Date: 1/4/2016 5:01:00 PM
Love is the gift and the bless In this world , it is the ultimate power in the universe.....great write my friend thanks for sharing....hugs / / :) dalia
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White Sage
Date: 1/5/2016 6:21:00 PM
Oh! Dalia i mean, very sorry for that...
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Date: 1/5/2016 6:17:00 PM
thanks dear Laura, love's surely the best...
Date: 1/2/2016 11:13:00 AM
We never lose love even when we age. As humans love is what keeps us going in life and it does not ever become uncomplicated. A wonderful emotion and a great write. Blessings Edith
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Date: 1/2/2016 2:50:00 PM
thanks Edith...love's always been immortal
Date: 1/2/2016 5:46:00 AM
Impressive poetic expressions that do not leave the heart unmoved, dear W.S. A seven!
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Date: 1/2/2016 10:25:00 AM
Thanks for commenting Demetrios
Date: 1/2/2016 1:27:00 AM
Interesting write, WS. You entitled this love but you also speak of infatuation...and judgements...and manipulations...are these part of love? I'm curious. Thanks for visiting my poem.
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Date: 1/2/2016 4:02:00 AM
yeah, they and more are all part of love, with the diverse ways it exists...love is like life itself...

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