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LOVE

Cessation the love
Household has been scattered
When love lost

Humming in the community
Malicious gossip in the society
Disorder in the society
Degrading the society
Society has been scattered
When love lost

Humming in the state
Malevolent rumour in the state
As the day chameleon to night
Insomnia in state
Peace elude state
State has been scattered
When love lost

Mystery to nation
When    love    lost

Oh! It is a dream
Why do we stop loving
While love exist
Love is above all existent

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/26/2017 10:58:00 AM
Hi, Afolabi, taking in your first posted poem here on soup,,,and Mmm, what a stunner, love the theme, and the sentiment, you get the subject matter over to the reader so well...
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Date: 8/11/2015 7:39:00 AM
AM, lovely poem. Beautiful sentiment.
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Date: 8/6/2015 2:05:00 AM
Nice write Afolabi. Powerful!!!
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Date: 7/28/2015 8:46:00 PM
Hmmmn. Your heart truly beats, Afolabi. I'm new to poetry soup and have started with your first offering. Well done.
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Date: 7/13/2015 10:48:00 AM
Love is above all existence, beautifully done. Congrats my lovely friend and loved always,bl
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Date: 7/5/2015 3:21:00 AM
Afolabi, congratulations. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/4/2015 7:49:00 PM
Afolabi :) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thank you for supporting my contest. LOVE SKAT :)
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 7/5/2015 12:36:00 AM
Your contest is just an encouragement for me to put more effort on my doing, thanks a lot your "cong". Is really appreciated and your kindness heart(welcome into mine) you are a beloved poet....bless you. SKAT.................A.M.
Date: 6/24/2015 6:54:00 AM
I love the love message in your 1st gift. Welcome to soup.
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Date: 6/7/2015 8:33:00 AM
I have enjoyed your first offering. I wish you a warm welcome to the soup. I see you already have an appreciative audience for your work.
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Date: 5/30/2015 12:04:00 PM
Your heart is so known is this verse, a beautiful piece. 7 Hugs dear friend
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Date: 5/7/2015 2:30:00 AM
When love lost the world burned, when love lost suffering was the cost...I admire the intelligent elevation from the micro example to the macro, from family to the national level Afolabi. "Insomnia in state, State is not at peace..." I interpret this expression as state paranoia eliminating rights and privacy, super surveillance. Love and lunacy, a strange balance...J.A.B.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 5/7/2015 2:33:00 AM
I am FAVING this poem primarily for the style of escalating moral intellect Afolabi. J.A.B.
Date: 5/3/2015 2:20:00 PM
Lovely and intelligent poem by which to introduce yourself to Soup readers, Afolabi. Love is there for the taking; why do some turn it into hate?! // paul
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Date: 4/26/2015 3:04:00 PM
Afolabi, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 4/29/2015 11:30:00 AM
Thank you for kindness
Date: 4/25/2015 9:41:00 AM
Hi Afolabi.. powerful, well constructed write, my friend. Welcome to Poetry Soup, a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give any of the varied contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more good writes this month! Please take time to check me out, ok... PS.. If you have any questions about the Soup feel free to ask, just send me a Soup Mail. Talk soon!
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 4/29/2015 11:33:00 AM
Thank you for the worm wellcome,i appreciate it.
Date: 4/25/2015 9:41:00 AM
PS.. It is impressive work!
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Date: 4/22/2015 4:05:00 PM
Impressive work
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