Love

the curse and the burden's been lifted,
the path of my life has been shifted,
at melting my heart you are gifted,
brought me back from the dark, i had drifted,
 
you awaken the love in my soul,
you complete my heart, it is whole,
my heart is yours, you have full control,
you and me, we will meet all our goals,
 
this thing we have created is love,
feel it was orchestrated above,
this feeling i'll relate it to a glove,
the hurt that had me shaded, you dispose of,
 
i can't express how i feel for you,
it hits my body in waves, that i dive into,
and when it hits me i no longer feel blue,
we stick together using love as our glue,
 
i hope and pray everyday you never tire of me,
i've looked into a future, with out you, i can't see,
i can feel through our connection how great it will be,
my heart has been caged, the way i feel set it free.

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/25/2014 4:48:00 PM

:) true love softens everything and somehow it also comes by that everywhere seems to turn brighter and happier.. :) the rhyme and beat :) 2nd paragraph :) it's nice when two comes together and in unison will go to face all things.. :)

Eric Schojan
Date: 5/27/2014 10:55:00 AM

exactly olive!! when you break down my poems you always seem to hit the emotion i was going for right on the head!! lol :) thank you so much for reading! :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/22/2014 8:36:00 PM

Hello Eric, your poem flows, and ends with good rhyme. Love, how wonderful you describe the feeling and emotion, Glue sounds just about right. I like your line, "You awaken the love in my soul." For you know what they say about LOVE... Anyone can look at others eyes, but Lovers can see into each others’ souls through the eyes "that's one of my favorite quotes" I hope you know, love is a good feeling, but free, I don't know. Love and enjoyed this....LINDA

Eric Schojan
Date: 5/27/2014 10:57:00 AM

Thank you so much PDA :) and you're so right, when I wrote that line i was actually thinking about that quote, the eyes are the portals to the soul :)