Love

He stroked my hair
I yielded my heart
Into Him

His eyes opened doors
Inside me
I thought were closed

My longing is filled
With His divine love
I am set free

©? Brenda V northeast   6th January  2012

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Ashek Rahaman

Date: 1/11/2012 8:56:00 AM

loved it branda

Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/11/2012 4:59:00 PM

Thank you Ashek, blessings, Brenda : )

M.I.A .

Date: 1/9/2012 5:47:00 PM

simple yet profound, Brenda! enjoyed this alot

Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/9/2012 6:32:00 PM

Thank you Mia, blessings, Brenda : )

Maureen Lefanue

Date: 1/9/2012 1:32:00 AM

Dear Brenda, Thank you for your kind comment re my poem. So glad you enjoyed it! I enjoyed your Love poem. It is amazing what love can do and how it can totally change our lives. God bless :) Maureen

Sarah Mullan

Date: 1/8/2012 8:08:00 AM

I love this, Brenda :) Thank you for being so nice and seeing mine. Love, Sarah

Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/8/2012 8:14:00 AM

The pleasure is mine Sarah and thank you, brenda : )

Maureen Lefanue

Date: 1/7/2012 1:31:00 AM

Love and blessings to you too, Brenda! God's promises are something we can hold on to. He doesn't promise and then not deliver. :)

Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/7/2012 11:18:00 PM

OH yes - Our God is always faithful- thank you Maureen, Blessings, Brenda

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/6/2012 8:19:00 PM

Another fine poem, Brenda. I thank you for reading and reviewing my two-part entry "Bizarre Thoughts". Not many people here take the time to read the longer poems.

Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/7/2012 11:17:00 PM

Yes long poems can take a lot of limited time, but yours were intriguing and well worth the read, Thank you Robert, Brenda : )