Love

“One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life. The word is love.”

—Sophocles, Greek Poet

Love

The strong intensity, of primal love,
He’d tossed from a tree, choice gift from above.
She caught the apple in her snow white glove.
As Newton’s gold fell, the cooing of doves.

Soon, or later, a claddaugh surprises.
Hands holding one heart in friendship sunrise.
The crown under for better or worse skies.
He’d be called for service…can’t say goodbyes.
Farsickness - rains every day in their eyes.
He longs for faraway places…she sighs.
He carries one photo, but she - a prize.
All his pain and suffering, worth the highs.

No letters, Dear John or Jane, on the fence.
They put their all in - survival intense.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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La France Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 3:17 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win in my contest, Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 6:37 PM
Thank you, Constance!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 9:16 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Love"  write again. It is hard to write/to get a Dear John or Jane from a loved one. Enjoy your day with your wonderful win.............
Rodrigues Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 12:34 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Kendrick Avatar
May 11, 2024 at 4:15 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in Constant's contest. Way to go. Love has a way. Sara K
Kendrick Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 9:43 AM
I had my plan to see it last night but I fell asleep so that was out, however, they say if we are not covered with clouds there should be a better chance today so I plan once again to try. I have always wanted to see it in person so God has given me this opportunity if I blow it, it is on me. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
May 11, 2024 at 5:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! Have you seen the Aurora Borealis? Not me.
Hind Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 6:10 PM
Definitely different, Kim- it's an enjoyment to read tonight
Rodrigues Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 7:08 PM
So glad you like this one! I had fun writing a sonnet with a different arrangement per contest. ~ Kim
George Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 9:14 PM
You are so unique in your approach to every subject, dear Kim. Your diction is never 'the- run- of- the mill' type. You use elegant and lofty diction. All the Best!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 6:03 AM
Thank you somuch, dear Valsa! I appreciate the encouragement!
Nicholsen Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 6:58 PM
What an awesome love story enjoyed reading your poem.blessings
Rodrigues Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 8:36 PM
Thank you, Yolanda! :)
Poet Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 12:22 PM
A dramatic interpretation of the sonnet contest, Kim... It is refreshing to observe your unique approach. This one has a great rhythm and rhyme scheme.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 8:35 PM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 10:44 AM
Your "Love" is a wonderful write. A powerful word. Many times misused. True love can be hard to find. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day.............
Rodrigues Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 8:35 PM
It can be misused but it can also be a winderful thing!
One Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 10:37 AM
An intense take on the sonnet contest.. Nice to see you do things differently.. This one flows and rhymes very well dear..
Rodrigues Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 8:34 PM
Thank you, Silent! :)
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