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L*o*v*e*

As I watch her from across the open squares way ~ Beneath this black and white zebrad umbrellas, curtain and stage.... Navigating, throughout the hurried animated crowds While holding fast to the facades below their colourful awnings Trying to avoid to escape, caricatures candied, perpetual, and sometimes pelting rain.... Which seems to often fall amid the winters erebus of her days Eyes to the ground, as she somehow seems a bit encumbered Wiping this jeweled tear, from upon the treasure of her lovely face ~ Thinking, what would I wish to tell her To bring comfort and hope, to her priceless heart and soul!? For I have sincerely loved and cared for her, profoundly This elegantly splendid light~aside the pages of so many different ways.... What shall I bestir unto her; among these dreams in which I have pondered?! As she passes through this golden glasses revolving door ~ Slowly, her enchantingness fading from my view While tossing these stars, of sparklings glitters, I would desire to impart.... Taking another sip from my drink, as I candidly contemplate!? Life, can often be as though standing before a broken mirror Scattered reflections amid the images in which we find Humanities ships asail; tossed to and fro, atop the waverings wistful waves.... The best one shall ever know from among the most Is the flutterings of these ebbs and flows Parabolic perceptions of souls; eyes, which seize and then blink These dawns of love~these shadows of dusk Like grasping dust; carried, upon the horizontal planes.... By the winds of time; preludes, towards the inevetable portals of change! Standing, as she now exits the building; considering, what shall I tell her? What will I say? While I make my way, to the place wherein "Her Beauty," waits ~ This moment of a heart; to caress these, sometimes storms.... "Hello dear, I haven't seen you in awhile, how are you today?" As I place my hand about her perfectly pleasant shoulder, tightly ~ And tenderly smile with this knowing embrace, that shall never, dissipate! Whispering softly into her ear, "don't worry dear, for everything will be ok" Making our way, through the vibrant and bustling crowds Pointing to her precious, somewhere, beyond the breaking clouds Towards the sun as it glows; peaking, through these drapes, of soon to be, ending rain Reflections.... Smiling as I wave, and then call, her coruscatings, beautiful name ~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ L*O*V*E*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/1/2010 6:09:00 PM
((Salut, John! Comment vas-tu? Tre's Enchante'!)) Delighted & Wonderful , I must say what women would not want to be called ((AMORE'.)) Taking A French lesson for fun. I find it very Romantic likeyour poetry. By the way thanks for the recomment. You are a very lovely commenter on the soup I hear and read. Once again---((Merci,Monsieur ---- Au revoir!)),..SidneyLeeAnn=p.d.
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Date: 6/21/2009 12:14:00 AM
I LOVE this!!...........I felt as if i was watchn a nice movie.....a nice romantic movie...!! what a brilliant write.....!!! Love this!!! keep it up> Crystal
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Date: 5/19/2009 4:07:00 PM
thanks for your too kind comments,glad you are fine too- my friend--charma
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Date: 5/8/2009 7:26:00 AM
I can only say brilliant for there is no better word John, I am always in awe of your writting, you are leaps and bounds ahead, hope you are well, my very best wishes and God Bless Ann.
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Date: 5/7/2009 2:26:00 PM
Well, John, Your coruscating poem sparkles brightly and give a delightful peek into the workings of a man's heart when he loves...even from a distance. This is a beautiful poem full of flowing words and visions of beauty. It's impossible to pick a favorite part. It is all so wonderful. But this one caught my eye. "Life can often be as though standing before a broken mirror. Scattered reflections amid the images in which we find Humanities ships…” Superb. Love your work. Always, Dane
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Date: 5/7/2009 2:13:00 PM
I love the entire poem,John, full of l*o*v*e* but the lines, "life can often be as though standing before a broken mirror, scattered reflections amid the images in which we find" these words really spoke to my soul.
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Date: 5/7/2009 12:52:00 PM
So beautiful to read John, your words are just incredible, I really really love this poem, it speaks so much about love.. Brilliant... Thankyou for your comments on my poem.. Take care, Jo
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Date: 5/3/2009 10:29:00 AM
This is so beautiful, it tugged at my very heart. Sigh* This whole poem just breathes within my soul...does that make sense? You have a great light in you. Love, Sara:)
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Date: 5/2/2009 6:57:00 AM
So sweet! I enjoyed reading this John, thank you for sharing.
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Date: 5/1/2009 6:55:00 AM
It is from the desire for mortal love that we make models of desire of God ... It is with divine character that love knows its triumph in us ... poets know God better than all ... for always they are in communication with him by inspiration ... you know him by each victory of your faith .. the test is until the end ... and you must pass them all ... was away for a while. Gladly joining you in prayers, my friend.
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Date: 5/1/2009 4:58:00 AM
Your ...LOVE is so captivating...Please keep posting..Thanks for your thoughts on my writes..Blessings
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Date: 5/1/2009 3:55:00 AM
interesting.
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Date: 4/30/2009 9:42:00 PM
John, very nice, a composition of a great poet flowing from the heart. Keep on posting and thanks for sharing your gift. Ernilando
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Date: 4/30/2009 7:28:00 AM
A love-filled narrative John.Well written.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/29/2009 8:00:00 PM
A beautiful vivid write, this is truely magical! Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work, always appreciated.
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Date: 4/29/2009 9:07:00 AM
Oh la..the title certainly fits this vibrant piece, John! *Love*, that is somewhat star-struck by its fervour and intensity. "The breaking clouds..the ending rain", oh what sunny days and starry nights this could conjure up! A beautiful scenario...impacted by your tender thoughts. "coruscating beautiful name" sparkles and glitter in the utterance of her name.:) Wishing you and yours the best! Love to you, Mikki
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Date: 4/29/2009 6:31:00 AM
aww so beautiful so devotional, Josh always calls me Love so this poem you worte is going to be special to me, thanks for your kind comments God bless you from diane.
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Date: 4/29/2009 4:01:00 AM
Hey John! It has been way to long! Your poem, like always, is beautiful. I'm finaly taking a decent writing class, prepare for some good poems. Love, Leah
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Date: 4/29/2009 2:02:00 AM
My what stunningly beautiful poetry you write, always lighting a candle in the depths of the muse for us to see clearly the pallette you dip into time and again to create such masterpieces over and over. Thankyou for your kindness of comnenting my writes, so pleased you enjoy. I'm doing okeay thanks for asking, how about you? Kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 4/24/2009 6:05:00 PM
WOW Wow Dearest John what a story I enjoyed every line you take romance to new heights. I love your use of imagery as you describe where you are watching her! I wonder if you are this romantic with your wife?You are a wonderful writer I am so thrilled to read your works! Excellent job John !!! All my love Laura :)
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Date: 4/24/2009 2:47:00 PM
John, I love the journey you take us on in this richly romantic poem. You have a gift for making ladies want more of "John Rhinem" in their men. I simply swoon...
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Date: 4/24/2009 2:44:00 PM
excellent,wonderful-"what shall i tell her?what shall i say"-just give her this poem to read and she loves you forever,passionate caring and loving flowing poetry,of course this is going to my favs my friend----charma
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Date: 4/24/2009 12:33:00 PM
This is awesome!
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Date: 4/24/2009 10:31:00 AM
This is an amazing poem, John,....it almost feels as if one is looking at a beautiful, rather melancholy painting...so sad, yet so lovely that you can't take your eyes away...A lovely poem, with emotion that only you could write so beautifully. Excellence!.....Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/24/2009 10:26:00 AM
John that was a totally amazing poem - How are you brother, sorry its been so long my schedule has gone from nothing to do most of the day (While I was healing up) to busy all day every day - The lord blessed my wife and I which made it possible to buy our home - Love is the most beautiful of things because it comes from the Lord Jesus Christ and his sacrifice for us - great to read your work as always - YF4L, God Bless you John, MJ
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