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Some say she is fire, Others heat. Some think that she can not perceive warmth In view that she is the spark of passion- the flame. They say that her sea of embers prove their point But if so, Where's the passion? If you’ve never felt anything but heat, Was she ever there? I say she is ice, Marbled, still ice, For movement would create heat, But only she can cause the fever. When you find your soul She begins to ignite. Her flame becomes irrevocable, she mirrors you, Growing as you become whole. Now as she has become one with you, She keeps you warm. Any more when you step in the frigid winter The cold no longer incapacitates, Rather remind you of what is keeping you warm. She began as ice, Falling into heat. Just as you once fell, Moving with you all the way down. Gravitating into each other. Just as you were empty, She was ice. Now you are complete, And she is on fire.

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Date: 2/18/2021 4:55:00 AM
Abigail, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with your wonderful poem _Constance
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Date: 2/18/2021 1:23:00 AM
WoW! Congratulations on your win. Have a wonderful day ahead. Take care Rama
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Date: 2/18/2021 12:59:00 AM
Loved the last two lines....Congrats on your win Abigail :)
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Date: 2/17/2021 3:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Abigail, a beautiful write, well done ~ Belle
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Date: 2/16/2021 9:05:00 AM
Back with "Congratulations" on this new win. Have a blessed day with your win..............
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Date: 2/16/2021 8:42:00 AM
Abigail, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this wonderful poem _Constance
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Date: 2/15/2021 9:40:00 AM
Abigail, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this wonderful write _Constance
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Date: 2/15/2021 8:19:00 AM
Wow....a hot and spicy piece....Congrats Abigail :)
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Date: 2/15/2021 8:03:00 AM
Congrats on this winner. It reminds me of one written by Robert Frost called "Fire And Ice"..Sara
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Date: 2/13/2021 9:30:00 PM
Congrats!!
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Date: 2/13/2021 6:03:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you.
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Date: 2/9/2021 10:27:00 AM
Awesome write Abigail. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 2/8/2021 2:36:00 AM
Congratulations Abigail! Unexpected and yet powerful! Thanks for participating in the contest
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Date: 1/31/2021 8:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Enjoy your win/day with blessings....................
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