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Love, Responsibility, Burden and Loyalty

love is the spell your under when you give your heart and mind it sometimes last a little while and for some it last a life time responsabilities to care for obligations to pay for always fighting just like war take away the joys burdens have been carried for years and years sleepless night because of our fears it's inescapable when things are shared the unforgiven things you did loyalty that lasted fifty years the trust that grew when things were through the reason to wake and live another day the oneness of mind that comes with age

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 5/31/2012 2:37:00 PM

I always think it is a miracle when a couple are able to grow old together and still care. How does sit happen? It is elusive and I've never found the secret. This says so much and the message I take as my own!

The Situation
Date: 5/31/2012 8:48:00 PM

look at the title . that's how it happens. but i left one thing out; forgiveness. but that is reserved for the strongest of men and women. one of which i am not. so like you less than 100% is not enough.

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/12/2012 5:16:00 PM

I don't remember joy never being in my marriage even when we had disagreements. The joy of knowing you are loved transends small disagreements...ok..now...I LIKE THE POEM !!

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 1/11/2012 5:51:00 AM

Oh so golden, bless you, Bren

Red Fiery

Date: 12/24/2011 11:03:00 AM

youhave expressed each and every situation so well...and I loyalty that lasted fifty years the trust that grew when things were through the reason to wake and live another day the oneness of mind that comes with ageagree with u... .the best ...

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/17/2011 5:52:00 PM

this speeks of the wisdom of the ages. johnny