lousy head II

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I was inspired and motivated by the title of the previous limerick. Limericks traditionally address adult themes with humor. Hopefully, this is not too much to bear for the soup community censor be it automated or human.

Do blow jobs supplied as the norm Add thrill to a man's pleasure storm? Though oral acts please The giver could sneeze And create a transgender form

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2024 12:49:00 PM

Hahaha. And imagine if the guy was with a biter!

Duke Beaufort
Date: 1/15/2024 6:38:00 AM

Andrea, I'm glad you see the humor! I was thinking it could be either sex providing the service, but OMG, the results could hurt a bit.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/6/2024 11:09:00 AM

Maybe you should delete it. I got kicked off Twitter with a lot less. Though I'm fine with it myself.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/7/2024 7:45:00 AM

That's great. I know there are probably trolls here too. I was trolled on Twitter. I was getting too large a following.

Duke Beaufort
Date: 1/7/2024 7:17:00 AM

Thanks Hilda, I am glad you are not offended!! We know limericks have a history, and for the sake of fellowship with those who came before, my preference is to leave it. Wikipedia has a short history about it, which suggests the appropriateness of this line of thinking!