Louisiana Nightmare

---Brown Pelican Speaks---


I dreamed I danced with sea-creatures,
Between here and before…

I dreamt I wept with wandering waves,
Confused by silence, unable to ebb and flow…

I dreamed I prayed with the spirits of old sea captains,
Upon angelic clouds, unable to soothe the dry-docked tears
Of their grandchildren, looking skyward for hope…

I awoke………frozen in oil

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/22/2010 4:05:00 PM
Louisiana has had their share of problems in a short period of time..Great write to remind us of the disaster that is upon them..I hope that your night is filled with inspiration and it overflows into poems that you share with us here at soup...Sara
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Date: 6/13/2010 2:32:00 PM
A terrible vision. Great write, Jim. Love, daver
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Date: 6/11/2010 9:02:00 PM
what awesome images for this tragedy. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/11/2010 11:07:00 AM
Your poetry was a pleasure to read today James. May your weekend be full of love,good health and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/10/2010 10:30:00 PM
This is an excellent poem Jimbo,terrible situation!Hope you are doing fine!Celene!:)
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Date: 6/10/2010 9:00:00 PM
Im afraid we wont have anything left but a dream. to my favs...BG
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Date: 6/10/2010 8:34:00 PM
This is a great poem and i dont know if you meant the disater but i went through katrina...i love the symbolism. Matt
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Date: 6/10/2010 7:54:00 PM
Unable to ebb and flow nice expression, James. enjoyed it ... frozen in oil
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