Loud Mom Pushed In and Lynn Moved Out

Lynn was the sad mat and Sam the boss man.
She did what he said with black fry sauce pan.
Not cod he said with a mean swish and smirk.
She felt bad this was a life with a jerk.

Sam's mom was a storm. Came in on the run.
His king kid was eight and all kinds of fun.
Her thoughts in a cave. She felt blue and sad. 
A bad life with this bull act of a cad.

His loud mom pushed in and wise Lynn moved out.
Sam did not see her for he was a pout.
She's been gone a week, a month and a day.
Gained her best life back now free and so gay.


Sam spouts sad long words so some think he cares.
Free Lynn spins and sings her soul a fresh air.

Written 9-26=2019
Contest: Because It’s Tuesday 140-140 Sonnet Poetry Contest
Sponsor: William Kekaula
Checked syllables: www.howmanysyllables.com

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 10/1/2019 11:59:00 AM
congrats sweet Caren, well deserved! :)-luloo
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/2/2019 7:59:00 AM
Thank you my sweet friend! I love my new sign! This was an amazingly wonderful gift!
Date: 10/1/2019 12:49:00 AM
Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/1/2019 7:44:00 AM
Thank you Beata. I appreciate it.
Date: 9/30/2019 7:07:00 PM
thank God for his mom coming in like a storm...it was her blessing in disguise and the passage to her freedom...nice penning, congratulations on your win :) hugs
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/1/2019 7:44:00 AM
Sometimes the mom get the new woman to leave.
Date: 9/30/2019 6:26:00 PM
Granted, your entry was reread--till the absolute and impossible end of four--sailing into the winner's circle, well honored with my extended courtesies ~ Aloha always William
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/1/2019 7:45:00 AM
Thank you very much. I humbly and gratefully accept!
Date: 9/27/2019 1:14:00 PM
Sam's mom was a storm. Came in on the run.--I can picture that so clearly! So glad "wise Lynn" left!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/28/2019 1:35:00 AM
Me too! So glad she could get out before big bad MOM caught her!
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