Lotus

LOTUS

Asian lotus flower with water-black
Flowing hair and wide innocence,
In your mermaid soul I find  a mystery.
There is hurt in your eyes 
But invitation in your mouth.
Are you drained by repeated loss
In your search for ultimate happiness,
Final harbor, emotional restfulness ?
Your beauty belies a sadness; 
Your floral face hides nothing;
Wide the windows of your soul are open 
For all to see that your petals 
Have been roughly ruffled in your
Hurried quest to have answers to 
Questions buried deep in the water 
Flowing around your hair.
Waves roll over the years of drifting,
Washing the balm of salty kisses
Into those drawing lips, those tidal
Embraces, those whorls of curls,
Yet the spirals of the shell wherein
You hide cannot keep you safe 
From another maelstrom of love.

……………………………………………………………………..

Written by Sydney Peck
For   the   TELL HER STORY   contest  of  Constance  La  France
( Name of the girl is  “Lotus” )
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Onclaud Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 8:21 PM
hello, did you get my email and soup mail?? urgent! :)
Mehta Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 12:25 PM
Congratulations on this win in the contest of Constance, Sydney
Brown Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 10:53 AM
Congratulations on your Lotus winning in Constance's contest "Tell Her Story" Sydney. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 6:55 AM
Loved this one the first time I read it, Syd, and am so glad to see your poem in the winners' circle. Way to go! Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 12:32 AM
Wow, Sydney this is so artistic and written with true craftsmanship. I really like it. What a line "maelstrom of love!" Congratulations on the winner circle.
Onclaud Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 9:45 PM
this flowing piece is like a painting brushed with pastel impressions... very fluid, very much like my own copyrighted work... again, kidding! a real knock-out , syd.. go floor us! APPLAUSE..:) huggs, nette
Johnson Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 9:09 PM
Very interesting perspective on the contest. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 5:40 PM
Congrats Syd on your fantastic win in Tell Her Story with this dynamic write luv.. beautiful name and exciting tale to tell.. enjoy with luv..
Devonshire Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 4:38 PM
Syd, I saw a lot of sadness in the girl in Constance's photograph too. She's very beautiful, but something is obviously troubling her. Enjoyed reading your interpretation of Lotus's story told in verse. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
Onclaud Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 2:51 AM
got my soup mail yesterday?? kindly add you comments on selena on my commnet box, just wanna read it there.. huugs:)
La France Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 3:59 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest, Sydney, I love the name Lotus~~
Neels Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 11:37 AM
Sydney this is a real beauty delving into the crux of Lotus.. Good luck for the contest :)
Onclaud Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 10:52 AM
this is what i'm telling you, syd.. i'm asain and you got the whole idea again from me, lol.. honestly, this piece has a mystique sense of the "beauty" of a moment. great wording.... i ho[e you can comment on mine as well, " seelna.." be gentle, lol.. winning piece for me! :) huggs, nette
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