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Lotus

LOTUS Asian lotus flower with water-black Flowing hair and wide innocence, In your mermaid soul I find a mystery. There is hurt in your eyes But invitation in your mouth. Are you drained by repeated loss In your search for ultimate happiness, Final harbor, emotional restfulness ? Your beauty belies a sadness; Your floral face hides nothing; Wide the windows of your soul are open For all to see that your petals Have been roughly ruffled in your Hurried quest to have answers to Questions buried deep in the water Flowing around your hair. Waves roll over the years of drifting, Washing the balm of salty kisses Into those drawing lips, those tidal Embraces, those whorls of curls, Yet the spirals of the shell wherein You hide cannot keep you safe From another maelstrom of love. …………………………………………………………………….. Written by Sydney Peck For the TELL HER STORY contest of Constance La France ( Name of the girl is “Lotus” )

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Date: 3/11/2011 8:21:00 PM
hello, did you get my email and soup mail?? urgent! :)
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Date: 3/11/2011 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations on this win in the contest of Constance, Sydney
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Date: 3/11/2011 10:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your Lotus winning in Constance's contest "Tell Her Story" Sydney. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/11/2011 6:55:00 AM
Loved this one the first time I read it, Syd, and am so glad to see your poem in the winners' circle. Way to go! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/11/2011 12:32:00 AM
Wow, Sydney this is so artistic and written with true craftsmanship. I really like it. What a line "maelstrom of love!" Congratulations on the winner circle.
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Date: 3/10/2011 9:45:00 PM
this flowing piece is like a painting brushed with pastel impressions... very fluid, very much like my own copyrighted work... again, kidding! a real knock-out , syd.. go floor us! APPLAUSE..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/10/2011 9:09:00 PM
Very interesting perspective on the contest. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/10/2011 5:40:00 PM
Congrats Syd on your fantastic win in Tell Her Story with this dynamic write luv.. beautiful name and exciting tale to tell.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 3/10/2011 4:38:00 PM
Syd, I saw a lot of sadness in the girl in Constance's photograph too. She's very beautiful, but something is obviously troubling her. Enjoyed reading your interpretation of Lotus's story told in verse. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/10/2011 2:51:00 AM
got my soup mail yesterday?? kindly add you comments on selena on my commnet box, just wanna read it there.. huugs:)
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Date: 3/9/2011 3:59:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest, Sydney, I love the name Lotus~~
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Date: 3/9/2011 11:37:00 AM
Sydney this is a real beauty delving into the crux of Lotus.. Good luck for the contest :)
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Date: 3/9/2011 10:52:00 AM
this is what i'm telling you, syd.. i'm asain and you got the whole idea again from me, lol.. honestly, this piece has a mystique sense of the "beauty" of a moment. great wording.... i ho[e you can comment on mine as well, " seelna.." be gentle, lol.. winning piece for me! :) huggs, nette
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