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Lost Without You

When I heard your name on news, I was lost looking for a clue, Pain in my heart, Never thought we'd be torn apart, At least not so soon, You was the moon in my night, and in battles you was the fight in me, Tears filled my eyes Anger tightened my fist, The lingering blur felt like mist, mad I was? No I was pist! You could have been anything you Wanted to be God needed you more than me God brought you up a level to heaven and brought hell up a level to me I just never wanted to see The day you would have to leave.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/26/2014 8:36:00 AM
Hi Kahlil, this is a sad, powerful write and I can feel you deep, heartfelt grief. I congratulate you on your well-deserved win in the contest! Stay strong, my friend.
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Date: 6/26/2014 1:37:00 AM
Enjoyed the poem with the morning cup of tea. Congrats on the win
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Date: 6/25/2014 11:41:00 PM
Kahlil,, Congratulations:) Enjoyed every winning poem, on my list. Thanks for the support. If you like, stop by my latest blog "Poetic symphony" OR My Newest poem, THE NEW POET." It's a sweet dedication to every old and new poet. I've come in contact, since March 2010. LOVE ~LINDA
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