Lost/ Verschollen/ Desaparecido (Sentanka)

A drought ridden land
And miles and miles yet to go
Into uncertainty

A dream lost in desert sands
All tracks of existance wiped out

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Ein ausgedörrtes Land
Und noch Meile für Meile zu gehen
Hinein ins Ungewisse

Ein Traum verloren im Wüstensand
Ausgeöscht alle Spuren des Seins

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Una tierra secada
Y milla por milla para ir
Hacia lo desconocido

Sueño perdido en la arena del desierto
Todas las trazas de ser borradas



Note: Ludwig Leichhardt (1813-1848) was a German explorer, zoologist, botanist and
geologist. In 1842 he came to Australia to study its mostly unknown nature. He wrote a
diary on his first expedition (1844/45), titled "Journal of an Overland Expedition in
Australia 1844-1845. This ebook is available from the Australian Explorers Journals page.
His second expedition in 1848 failed and he started again on a third expedition in 1848 to
find a cross-country route from the cattle station McPherson (Queensland) to Perth
(Western Australia). He and other expedition members were lost in the desert. Two rescue
expeditions in 1858 ans 1869 ended unsuccessful. Only in 2006 a small copper plate was
found by an Aboriginal with Leichhardt's name engraved fixed to remains of a  half burnt
rifle which hung in a Baobab tree near the Simpson Desert. The tree was merked with the
letter "L"

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Date: 7/13/2010 11:17:00 PM
That is a very interesting Tanka. Even though this write is based on the explorer's true story, it carries a deep meaning. Uncertainty leads to loss. Thanks for sharing this and the information. Alles Gute, Caroline.
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Date: 7/13/2010 7:36:00 AM
Tante Grazia.. hope I spelled that correctly Gert.. fabulous of u to send me so many interpretations to use while I will be in Italy.. will think of more that might be important.. if u don't mind.. with luv.
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Date: 7/7/2010 9:23:00 AM
btw I do hope you come up with that book--that's really interesting, to come up with a book about your childhood :)
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Date: 7/7/2010 9:22:00 AM
Hi Gert ^_^ Mabuting gabi sa 'yo! (Good evening to you!) --yet another very interesting write from you, complete with very useful background info :) how sad that one's hunger for discovery can lead to one's death--that is passion indeed! btw thank you for your compliments about our chocolates-- I really enjoy making them--though mostly as a hobby haha it can be stressful & crazy how I wouldn't even want to eat chocolate after making all of it. will reply to your email soon! nikko :)
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Date: 7/6/2010 7:15:00 PM
Love it, Gert!! Did you mean wiped out at the end line. Or maybe they spell it differently where you are? YOu made it romantic sounding! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/6/2010 6:34:00 PM
Gert this is a special write.. so wonderful and your footnotes are so grand.. I posted a new blog tonight with some vacation photos.. we have taken hundreds.. so if u want to taste a little island magic go see ..more to post in the coming days after Soupers have seen these... and.. u must read my Vacation Photos little bio... u are in it... AlohA..
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Date: 7/6/2010 5:09:00 PM
mysterious and wonderful! Gert! jimbo
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Date: 7/6/2010 4:03:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Gert. I hope you plan on being here and writing for years to come. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2010 2:36:00 PM
Great write, thank you for the information you've added, really interesting.. With regards to my "the unknown" piece, its a work in progress hehe, but I'm still enjoying it.. Thanks for your comments and encouragement, enjoy your week further, :) Wilma
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Date: 7/6/2010 7:42:00 AM
So many adventure seekers take on treacherous expeditions, Gert. It seems most are lost at sea, but I'll the account of Leichhardt's first attempt to cross the Australian desert is a compelling read. We are left to wonder what became of him and his comrads. Informative and well-penned tanka. I'm always learning from you, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/6/2010 7:35:00 AM
great poem, congrats on the feature this week enjoyed reading today!!
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Date: 7/6/2010 5:17:00 AM
A strong and deep Tanka, a journey with sadness. Enjoyed your poem,..LeeAnn
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Date: 7/6/2010 5:00:00 AM
Brave soul that tried unsuccessfully to accomplish a goal..Today we have modern satellites that probably have mapped that area..He would be surprised modern day..Keep the informative and educational writes flowing..Sara...Thanks for faithfully stopping by and commenting on my work..
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