Chris Green Poet Rhyme

Lost Together

Lost together 

Take my hand we’ll stroll along
this winding way to somewhere far

Through evergreens, warm summer winds
with cricket songs and shooting stars

On down a path of jasmine vine
in moon beam light and fragrance sweet

We follow each desire known
and destinies ahead to meet

Two silhouettes, a quiet night
in footprints left on sandy shores

Around the bend, down every lane,
you by my side, I need not more

Until we reach the mountain top,
where echoes flow of wishes tossed

And we shall shout to all the world
within our love, we two are lost . . . together

Good night Soupers

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John Hamilton April 3, 2017 at 11:04 AM And if we're lost at least we are lost together, was a big hit for Blue Rodeo a big country band here in Canada. Loved the sentiment and execution of this write, top notch again! Chris Green April 3, 2017 at 12:00 PM Thanks John, I'm not familiar with them. Thanks for your kind words.

Paul Callus March 23, 2017 at 4:28 PM I enjoyed this romantic poem, Chris. It's great for two persons to be 'lost together' in love! Regards // paul Chris Green April 3, 2017 at 11:59 AM Thanks so very much Paul.

Pashang Salehi March 23, 2017 at 10:23 AM Great poem.... beautifully done.. Chris Green March 23, 2017 at 10:39 AM Thank you so very much

Alexis Y. March 23, 2017 at 6:09 AM Hi Chris, This is sooo romantic. I loved it from start to finish. And the imagery just took my breath away. It was a lovely poem to end the day. A without a doubt seven: -) Alexis Chris Green March 23, 2017 at 8:58 AM Hi Alexis. I appreciate your wonderful comments my sweet friend.

Sara Ella March 22, 2017 at 9:51 PM so so romantic Chris <3 :) Chris Green March 23, 2017 at 8:57 AM Thank you Sara for your kind words.

Arthur Vaso March 22, 2017 at 9:13 PM Chris, this was just so lovely, you have such a way with the romantic verse! Chris Green March 23, 2017 at 8:57 AM Thank you so very much Arthur

Lin Lane March 22, 2017 at 6:10 PM Your sweet words should be sung like lyrics to a lullaby, Chris. Chris Green March 23, 2017 at 8:55 AM Thank you so very much Lin.