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Lost To the Wind

The children bask in Mom’s sincerest praise. Her love and nurturance bring out their best, but bids for Dad’s attention seldom faze this cold, distracted man. He’s richly blessed but seems to have in mind some acid test no kid could pass! These teens begin to stray, but not far from the path. Dad starts to pray, “Forgive my failings, Lord. Please help me mend the rift and guide them from the worldly fray. Don’t let my efforts be lost to the wind.” August 5, 2020 Contest Title: Pick-a-Title--Vol 26, Dizain placed 3rd Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 8/19/2020 5:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely poem, Janice:-) Loved the last line!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/19/2020 6:23:00 PM
Edward, thank you so much for sponsoring and for my placement. Janice
Date: 8/6/2020 8:05:00 AM
Lovely verse, dear friend. God bless you
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/6/2020 9:52:00 AM
Thanks so much, Regina. Janice
Date: 8/6/2020 5:54:00 AM
You often hear of situations like that Janice and sadly some try to change but often too late. Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/6/2020 6:36:00 AM
Thanks so much, Tom. Janice

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