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Lost Sparkles Senryu Strings

I’ve lost my sparkle Another lights up your mind My words in black veil Nostalgia reminds Muses reign for a short time Prophecy fulfilled I will not accept “Has been muse” not my label A whispered goodbye Eileen Manassian

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2014 3:48:00 PM

a nice string of poetry, Eileen. Lost sparkles is a very creative way to title it!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/28/2014 1:51:00 AM

Thanks for the visit, Andrea. Hope all is well.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2014 1:15:00 PM

- A lovely poem, dear friend Eileen - (turn on the light ..... show me your face ..... it is completely BLACK) <3 U !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/28/2014 1:51:00 AM

Thank you, my Sunshine. My face is back...and with a smile. Hope all is well with you. Hugs.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/27/2014 9:23:00 AM

Your Muse is alive and well although probably exhausted after providing you with abundant inspiration.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/28/2014 1:52:00 AM

Well, I was actually writing about ME being someone's muse. He had forgotten me....or so it would seem. Anyway....You know me, Richard. I like a good rant. Take care.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/27/2014 8:45:00 AM

A whirlpool of exquisite Senryu verses! The depth of the soul unimaginable as your sparkle of poetry! Cheer up! Bring the smiling avatar back!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/28/2014 1:53:00 AM

Here I am, Demetri Mou. Here I am. Esai kala? Mou lipis. Thanks for the visit and the lovely comment. You always shower sprinkles on this fairy. Hugs

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 8/27/2014 6:40:00 AM

eileen beautifully painted piece excellent pen

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/28/2014 1:54:00 AM

LIAM...I'm glad you've come. I don't often see you here though I always visit you. :) I'm glad to see you!

Justin Bordner

Date: 8/26/2014 11:15:00 PM

Your emotions are striking Eileen. My Love Muse will always stand at the peak of my heart. I'm sure that the man who loves you will endure your anger, and faithfully nurture your heart. Goodbye need not be forever Eileen...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/28/2014 1:55:00 AM

Yes, Jason, the man who truly loves me will. I'm sure of that. Thank you for visiting me. I hope to have your visits always for they are a joy to my heart and soul. They refresh me.

Tim Smith

Date: 8/26/2014 1:50:00 PM

I caught a glimpse of your muse hand in hand, hair disheveled, and all flushed coming out of the Four Seasons. with mine.I can only image what they were up to but my muse had a grin so big you wouldn't believe..... Hugs Tim

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/28/2014 1:56:00 AM

DANG....so it's our Muses having fun instead. Oh dear. Hope all is well with you. My muse needed more, so that kind of explains the silence. ;)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/27/2014 9:24:00 AM

Ha ha, one of the best comments I have read today!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/26/2014 10:50:00 AM

Love ur write Eileen! Lost sparkles don't suit ur bubbly heart my dear,, yet great work!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/28/2014 1:57:00 AM

Thanks...the bubbles burst at times, Dr Upma. Thanks for being a bubble maker in my life. Hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 8/26/2014 9:21:00 AM

I love the imagery of you going into mourning for your muse. My muse comes and goes Eileen some days she is bright and breezy other days she goes into hiding but she does reappear eventually. Hugs a ever Jan xxx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/28/2014 1:58:00 AM

Yes, well...my muse is a naughty boy. Needs a bit of a spanking, he does. Never mind. All is well that ends well. Take care, my dear.