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Lost Souls In Navy Blue Alleys

Ghosts rise up at night From the sinking tale of tides rocks hear all the Cries Charma (Not for the contest,but inspired by Raul's picture 'Ghost tides')

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/5/2012 5:34:00 PM

hi..Charmaine, how are you? a very nice lovely inspired haiku... it was nice to hear from you... how is your soup relationship..if you dont mind me asking! i've always wonder what happened to you it was very nice to hear from you thank you thank you take self always..pd

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/7/2012 5:09:00 AM

Hi dear i'm back to soup..loving it as ever.Many things happened which made me stop writitng,but now it is possible for me to return.. I missed here so much..and i will look forward to read some great poetry of yours ..Hugs Charma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/22/2010 8:53:00 AM

Great imagination in this write that should do well in the competition. Good luck. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. The poem was about a early morning thunder and lighting storm that I used the bowling as a metaphoric language to represent the sounds of the storm.The dog was real. Sara

Tobey Hill

Date: 2/22/2010 7:17:00 AM

very nice..TAH

James Fraser

Date: 2/21/2010 4:45:00 PM

Haunting Haiku Charmaine >> James

Gert W. Knop

Date: 2/21/2010 3:44:00 PM

Hello, Charma, grazzi ghal comments! When I was a child i culd never sleep in a dark room and a light must have switched on all night. I was really scared of the dark. Meanwhile - with the age - I am enjoying the dark as it promises a godd and relaxing sleep. Wishing you a good night as well and a very good new week!...Gert