Notes About The Poem

Not for the contest but inspired by it....thank you Edward

Lost September

I lost September somewhere in the sadness
lost track of shadows in the sun
mourned not fading warmth nor shortened days
shivering in a crystal cloak of frost.

Lovers, sated on a Summer’s sweetness
succumbing to the lie – forever’s now
idle in the arms of humid passion
wilting on the vines of plumping lust.

Cold soil covering September
blanketing the joys of milder days
memories slow fading with the  season
huddled near the fencepost by the barn.


John G. Lawless
©10/9/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Walker Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 3:11 PM
Really enjoyed this. Should have put it in for the contest.
Romios Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 10:41 AM
Wow! Beautifully penned, John Panagiota
Green Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 10:44 AM
I really enjoyed this one John. A different approach to the seasons that bring a little heat to the autumn scene.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 10:23 PM
This is a beautiful portrait you've painted. I enjoyed it so much. Blessings and love, Gina
Lawless Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 7:01 AM
Thank you Regina, a reference to poetry as a portrait is always a great compliment
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