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Lost My Self

My heart is kind, 
My mind is welcoming,
My soul is of an angel tear of goodness,
My thoughts are as powerful yet sinful of 
This world's blackness, I wonder through 
My self not knowing where I am or who
I am I don't recognize any of this energy
I never seen such loss in a world full of it all
The sun is Deming the light still 
Shines to lead me back, I start to 
See familiar things I'm starting to 
See me again, oh what a bad dream 
I let someone of a bright darkness in .

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/10/2016 7:50:00 AM

- I enjoy reading your first poem, you write great Nicole :) - Warm welcome to Poetry - Soup :) - hugs // Sun :)

Skat A

Date: 7/4/2016 11:09:00 PM

Nicole, :), Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I know you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/4/2016 9:34:00 PM

Nicole, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@