Sunlite Wanter Poet Rhyme

Lost Maybe For the Best

I must accept the message, “You lost,”
I suppose in the nick of time.
The glow that I carried with hope
Has dulled, the sun gone away to hide.

Now that life is without you,
Days of illusions and dreams gone away,
I am gathered, kneaded upon a potter’s wheel,
Being shaped for another day

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Charles Messina January 18, 2019 at 10:18 PM It's not a good feeling to lose someone, that's a given. But the lord has a way to work things out. Nice write, SW. Charlie

Pat Adams January 18, 2019 at 7:48 AM They say it's better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all, but that doesn't dull the pain much. Only time will do that or maybe a new adventure!!!.........pat

Susan Ashley January 13, 2019 at 7:58 PM Your beautiful poem is thoughtful and meaningful, Sunlite. Too often pain and change go together, but hopefully its change for the better. I loved your last two lines as well, very artfully stated. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Bette Bavington January 13, 2019 at 3:43 PM To love and lost is to make us wiser and happier when the right one comes along. The changing we do is definitely for the better. Good poem.

Heidi Sands January 13, 2019 at 2:50 PM Well expressed. I like the line about the potter's wheel and the ending of being shaped for another day because I see it as positive change :)

Anne-Lise Andresen January 13, 2019 at 2:30 PM - Regardless   ... it's sad to lose .... even if it's for the best, Sunlite - Lovely written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)