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Lost Mayans

Lost Mayans


Ancients who lived long go
Living for the sun and waning moon
Some hoped to be living by noon
Children laughed in the maize fields
As elders struggled for the grasshoppers wisdoms
Life was simple
Daily toils and simple strife
Intermixed with love and social struggles
Lost Mayans
Sifting in my dreams

The ancients have had many a princess
As have I
We both are buried deep within our dreams
Longing for days when love kissed our salty lips
Wine flowed like riverbanks at their brink
Only when the waters ebbed did the sadness make the noon

Now the Mayans are but stories in a book
I often wonder
Who am I?
If not a line 
In someone else’s story

Skeletons of love
Inside a burnt out heart
For I myself have nothing to tell
Being lost long ago
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Hicks Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 3:25 PM
"I often wonder who am I? If not a line in someone else's story" ... really deep stuff here, Arthur. I love the blend of the history and romanticism. When I was little I had a strange obsession with Aztec culture ... makes one wonder how today's world will look like in the future ... just lines in a story.
Marie Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 7:37 PM
Wow..you weave love, history and philosophical ponderings exceptionally well.:-) The language is stunning, the imagery just breathtaking, and the small words are "large" in emotion with a "wallop" of meaning :-) A deeply sad piece, expertly crafted. This really is a pleasure to read.:-) blessings, lynn
Vaso Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 8:32 PM
Thank you so much Lynn Marie! :)
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 8:21 PM
such a sad poem my friend:-( hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 8:31 PM
Thanks Jan, I missed this comment, thanks to Soups new improvements! LOL
Smith Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 6:56 PM
Excellent write Arthur. Am I just a line in someone else's story?..fantastic
Vaso Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 7:04 PM
Thanks Tim!
Gupta Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 6:09 AM
How beautifully you get hold of the river ... how historically the Mayans ... beautiful ...
Vaso Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 6:14 PM
Thank you so much Probir!
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