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Poetry/Cinquain/Lost Love
Copyright Protected, ID 10-1586-884-18
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, October 18, 2023
For the International Contest, Changed Past,
Sponsor, Fire Bird, Judged 10/31/2023

Fourth Place

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"When you lose your love to death, you are left with a wound- it will heal in time but you will always have a jagged scar." Quote by _ Constance We met at the art gallery he was staring at me I pretended to not notice but did Smiling he spoke to me his voice was like music and I was lost in sea blue eyes and love We wed pledged our true bond he was my everything oh, we had so many great plans until My life changed by his death so, I folded my wings and then each sad petal opened again

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Jay Narain

Date: 10/19/2023 11:40:00 AM

Sorry to read this sad poem.

Constance La France
Date: 10/19/2023 1:20:00 PM

Jay, thank you so much for your compassion and comment, blessings !

Deb M

Date: 10/19/2023 11:22:00 AM

Beautiful Constance so very sad! Cuddles…..Debx

Constance La France
Date: 10/19/2023 1:20:00 PM

Deb, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, blessings !

Joseph May

Date: 10/19/2023 7:56:00 AM

A poignant write Constance, sorry for your loss

Constance La France
Date: 10/19/2023 1:21:00 PM

Joseph, thank you so much for the compassion and comment, blessings !

Ink Empress

Date: 10/19/2023 2:45:00 AM

“His voice was like music” ah the way you describe and tell us your story through various forms is beyond impressive! I loved reading this and i felt the pain. How things change when our beloved is no longer with us. Sigh. Im so sorry for your loss, i love reading your poems. They speak volumes

Constance La France
Date: 10/19/2023 1:23:00 PM

Ink, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, they may seem disconnected on here but together they tell a story, blessings

The Situation

Date: 10/18/2023 7:14:00 PM

I too am at that age with memories and death.

Constance La France
Date: 10/19/2023 1:23:00 PM

Situations, thank you so much for the comment, I have been haunted with memories and death all of my life, blessings !

Yann Rolland

Date: 10/18/2023 4:28:00 PM

beautiful and touching, every romance has a meaning, thanks for the gracious poem

Constance La France
Date: 10/19/2023 1:24:00 PM

Yann, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, blessings !