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Lost Laughter

He looks ... Once more The wide, weathered barn door Tilts … To the wind Its hinges broken … Rusted It will never close again Doesn’t matter A small, solitary swallow Flees from the shadows within Vanishes into a chaste sun He wonders … To where will he fly? A radiant white dove Descends Upon the shimmering tin roof It struts (in righteous pride) It coos (in blessed compassion) And It defecates The field beyond this building is … just a field Is there more than clouds above? He hears the wife call to him … Gentle … Soothing His impotent body moves … Retreating The ache in his throat … Tormenting This time he’ll tell her that he didn’t … Hear the child’s laughter

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Date: 6/26/2018 3:47:00 PM
Brian I really love this.It is sensitive and quite beautiful.
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Brian Densham
Date: 7/8/2018 12:11:00 PM
Thanks.
Date: 5/21/2018 2:09:00 PM
Such a sad piece - but beautifully written, filled with imagery and symbolism! Well done, my friend. Please continue to share your awesome work with us here! Hugs. Pandita
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Brian Densham
Date: 7/8/2018 12:11:00 PM
I shall, thanks to this kind of support. Thank you.

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