Lost Laughter

He looks ... Once more

The wide, weathered barn door
Tilts … To the wind
Its hinges broken … Rusted
It will never close again

Doesn’t matter

A small, solitary swallow
Flees from the shadows within
Vanishes into a chaste sun

He wonders … To where will he fly?

A radiant white dove
Descends
Upon the shimmering tin roof

It struts (in righteous pride)
It coos (in blessed compassion)
And

It defecates


The field beyond this building is … just a field
Is there more than clouds above?

He hears the wife call to him … Gentle … Soothing

His impotent body moves … Retreating

The ache in his throat … Tormenting

This time he’ll tell her that he didn’t

 … Hear the child’s laughter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Coulstock Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Brian I really love this.It is sensitive and quite beautiful.
Densham Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 12:11 PM
Thanks.
Sietesantos Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 2:09 PM
Such a sad piece - but beautifully written, filled with imagery and symbolism! Well done, my friend. Please continue to share your awesome work with us here! Hugs. Pandita
Densham Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 12:11 PM
I shall, thanks to this kind of support. Thank you.
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