Lost In the Haze

The thrill and the high Need to be in with the crowd Knowledge, denial Drugs and life out of control To soon their potential…lost
2/4/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Makama Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 8:50 AM
This is wonderful and lovely. Nice poetry here dear friend.
Callus Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 9:48 AM
An excellent poem, Barbara; what a pity that life gets wasted in such a way! ~ paul
Dietrich Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 9:16 AM
very nicely done. I chose tanka style for MY lost poem too!!! Will be posting it sometime today. Good luck in the contest too.
Inman Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 8:21 AM
Deep thoughts, nice wriite.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 3:18 AM
The cold and dark realities that stab the heart are revealed in this impactful vision you have created Barbara. Bravo!
Andresen Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 12:28 PM
- Powerful poem, Barbara - // Anne-Lise :)
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