Lost In the Dark

You've been lost along the equinox of confusion's bitter myriad Although, you smile, there is a trace (somewhere in the languid night), of emptiness, turned bronze, instead We'll take a walk, beneath the limbs, in filtered light, against the glare The sun departs, to welcome night but sparks a light within your eyes It stirs the dust, and alters time. You suddenly become alive, with stories I had never heard. (I'll chase the dark to find you,) and even birds high on the branch, will stretch to hear what you might share. (Do you search a distant sky, this lonely hour?) With quavered voice, but strangely clear, A remnant of another year, awakens from a buried box. (There are lights upon the trail.) You turn a key, and now unlock. We walk the grove and as you spoke, a thousand words, once thought as lost, are ghosts, like shadows, under oaks, (where I have gathered the stars.) The leaves fall down and turn to ash. (The moon will be a candle.) I take your hand, to gently hold, into my own, as I am told, (while darkness frees you), about a child, in summer, born, then lost upon that autumn door. I cry for you, ...your tears are dry The comfort of the warmth of hands unite us now, beneath a sky, that's bringing dusk, across the land... (with the friendship of the night.) I've watched this girl now disappear, back into fog, she was before. The memory will drift away. (I tread the dark in silence-) Perhaps it's best to let it stay. We pass again, back through the gate, one moment left, to hesitate (moon and stars my companions.) A change of view, each step we take. Tonight is fraught of sadness, great... (until I find you.)
3/1/15 Carrie Richards ______________________________________________ Intermingle Contest: Sponsored by Craig Cornish A mix of two poems "Lost"--- written 10/15/14 "Chasing The Dark"--- written 9/17/11

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Date: 4/18/2015 6:41:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your fine win. LINDA
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Date: 4/18/2015 6:01:00 PM
CARRIE RICHARDS! OPEN WIDE AND SAY AHHHHH..We want to "Look" and see where you are pulling these wonders from! WOW...WOW...WOW...
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Date: 4/17/2015 1:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your always wonderful read a 7. Blessings dear friend Eve
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Date: 4/17/2015 3:35:00 AM
amazing Carrie, had to read twice so compelling
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Date: 4/17/2015 2:01:00 AM
Congs dear one and i loved this poem, Bryan loves, i'm in love with talented bards like you
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Date: 4/16/2015 5:12:00 PM
Hi Carrie, stopping back to congratulate you for your top 1st Place win for your intermingle poem! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/16/2015 4:46:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/1/2015 7:53:00 PM
Very very affecting Carrie it sounds like a child dealing with a parents alzheimer's. Light & Love
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Date: 3/1/2015 7:35:00 PM
Love your intermingle, Carrie. It flows so well and reads like one poem. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/1/2015 4:45:00 PM
I love the unique form that Craig has found - these poems merge so beautifully together - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 3/1/2015 3:03:00 PM
Good job mingling two of you poems .Reads like a winner to me..Way to go. Thanks for stopping by. Sara
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