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Lost In the Autumn Air

Words tremble
Crisp winds bear burdens
Summer promised, as daylight drifts away
Your heart.... singing in choirs of fading bloom
Hears not






james marshall goff
for Russell's Up In The Autumn Air contest
10/30/12

angstautumncinquain

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Holly Moore

November 10, 2012 at 1:07 PM

I liked "singing in the choirs of the fading bloom". Very beautiful! Holly Moore

Sara Kendrick

November 6, 2012 at 3:01 PM

I knew that it was winning material..Enjoyed reading again..Congrats..Sara

Hazel Connelly

November 5, 2012 at 8:45 AM

Congratulations on your win James.. :-)

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 5, 2012 at 7:34 AM

Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Up In The Autumn Air" contest Jimbo. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

November 4, 2012 at 7:33 AM

clappies for your greeat win, jimbo... divine!..:) huggs

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

November 4, 2012 at 3:50 AM

Congratulations on your win Jimbo, good one xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 3, 2012 at 11:09 PM

CONGRATS JAMES ON A GORGEOUS WRITE AND WIN LUV .. HOPE U R WELL .. WE R RECOVERING FROM DAMAGES OF HURRICANE SANDY HERE IN N.J. AND N.Y. NEED LOTS OF PRAYERS LUV.

Andrea Dietrich

November 3, 2012 at 9:56 PM

there is something very special about this little one here. I see I loved it the first time below here when I commented. I would have placed this right at the top. congrats. It's getting a fave!

Joyce Johnson

November 3, 2012 at 7:48 PM

Nice Cinquain James. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

November 3, 2012 at 12:25 AM

Hi, James, I am Hanitra from Madagascar. I just read and loved your comments on Debbie Guzzi's poem about the Worm. Very wise and encouraging thoughts. Cinquain is such a difficult form to fit deep thoughts in. But you did so well, it's a pleasure! Best wishes for the contest!:) Blessings, Hanitra