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Lost In the Autumn Air

Words tremble Crisp winds bear burdens Summer promised, as daylight drifts away Your heart.... singing in choirs of fading bloom Hears not james marshall goff for Russell's Up In The Autumn Air contest 10/30/12

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Date: 11/10/2012 1:07:00 PM
I liked "singing in the choirs of the fading bloom". Very beautiful! Holly Moore
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Date: 11/6/2012 3:01:00 PM
I knew that it was winning material..Enjoyed reading again..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/5/2012 8:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win James.. :-)
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Date: 11/5/2012 7:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Up In The Autumn Air" contest Jimbo. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/4/2012 7:33:00 AM
clappies for your greeat win, jimbo... divine!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/4/2012 3:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jimbo, good one xx
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Date: 11/3/2012 11:09:00 PM
CONGRATS JAMES ON A GORGEOUS WRITE AND WIN LUV .. HOPE U R WELL .. WE R RECOVERING FROM DAMAGES OF HURRICANE SANDY HERE IN N.J. AND N.Y. NEED LOTS OF PRAYERS LUV.
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Date: 11/3/2012 9:56:00 PM
there is something very special about this little one here. I see I loved it the first time below here when I commented. I would have placed this right at the top. congrats. It's getting a fave!
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Date: 11/3/2012 7:48:00 PM
Nice Cinquain James. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/3/2012 12:25:00 AM
Hi, James, I am Hanitra from Madagascar. I just read and loved your comments on Debbie Guzzi's poem about the Worm. Very wise and encouraging thoughts. Cinquain is such a difficult form to fit deep thoughts in. But you did so well, it's a pleasure! Best wishes for the contest!:) Blessings, Hanitra
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Date: 11/2/2012 9:21:00 AM
Reads like a winner..Great job..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
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Date: 11/1/2012 2:41:00 PM
wow, james. this one is awesome!!
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Date: 11/1/2012 8:34:00 AM
powerful poem here, Jimbo, like this....
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Date: 11/1/2012 7:50:00 AM
Hey, hey Jimbo... good one! Makes me kinda sad though! Really enjoying the java, my friend! Thanks again... have a great day, Jack
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Date: 11/1/2012 5:20:00 AM
jimbo, i love how this write just pulled me in with its soft charm... winning wishes and huggs!..:)
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Date: 10/31/2012 3:19:00 PM
JAMES , stopping by to wish you a Happy Halloween ;-).~hugs xox hugs~ Please have a happy, fun and safe Halloween. Trick or treat~ Love:-) PD
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Date: 10/31/2012 2:07:00 PM
Well written James, like this one a lot and thanks for the lovely comments xx
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Date: 10/31/2012 1:08:00 PM
Bravo !.....well written James !!! Best wishes for the contest. -- oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/31/2012 11:57:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Jimbo and wish you the best inthe contest. Hope to read more of it soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/30/2012 8:14:00 PM
Just wonderful James!Love this.Best wishes to you.
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