Jack Horne Poet Rhyme

Lost In Space

The floating satellite
Was sending pictures back,
We saw the worlds up close
And endless miles of black.

But then a massive craft
Appeared and beamed an arc.
Our satellite was hit
And everything went dark…

Jack Horne for Nathan’s Deep Space contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown October 8, 2012 at 12:11 PM Congratulations on your placement in Nathan's "Deep Space" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich October 6, 2012 at 11:55 PM hey, now, here is one I somehow had missed. Awesome to see it here as I go thru winners' list. Big congrats, my friend.

Bukang Liwayway October 5, 2012 at 11:25 PM Congrats on you win my friend Jack. hugs!!

Robert Pettit October 5, 2012 at 6:53 PM Congratulations on winning with this entry. You just might be describing the inevitable fate of the Voyager probes we sent into space years ago.

Debra Squyres October 5, 2012 at 5:08 PM This one is different than the rest I have read....I like where you took this. Simple and clear cut image you have created ...and it leaves a little mystery too. Congrats on your winning placement in the contest !!

Poet Destroyer A October 5, 2012 at 4:22 PM JACK, congratulations with your awesome poem in Nathan's "deep space" contest.. enjoyed~ xox~pd

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 5, 2012 at 4:18 PM SUPER CONGRATS JACK LUV ON A MESMERIZING WRITE AND AWESOME WIN .. WILL TRY TO GET TO YAHOO LATER LUV .. SUNDAY WE R BAPTIZING NEW LITTLE GUY WITH FESTIVITIES AT OUR HOME AFTER ..

Nathan D. October 5, 2012 at 3:47 PM thanks for the support' nate

Doris Culverhouse September 13, 2012 at 8:31 AM oh no all those billions for nothing....

Joy Wellington September 12, 2012 at 10:47 PM An unfortunate end for all involved, but your poem tells it all! Thanks for visiting and commenting. One love Jack. Joy Wells

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 12, 2012 at 6:50 AM Like this Jack even though you breed spiders in your bedroom, this is good ...xx

Poet Destroyer A September 10, 2012 at 8:49 PM Hello, Jack... i'm on my way to find you... Danger Master Robinson! DANGER!""" <---- lol that is from a movie called "lost in space". an excellent write. Hope Nathan, enjoys your poem... xox~pd

Harry Horsman September 10, 2012 at 4:13 PM I was thinking of entering this contest jack, could not think of anything to write, but boy this is good, 'hope i can bounce of it'

Barbara Gorelick September 9, 2012 at 5:17 PM Scarey...this should do well in the contest..BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 9, 2012 at 5:06 PM super creative write Jack luv .. can envision that scarry moment through these fantastic words luv .. good luck ..

Gwendolen Song September 9, 2012 at 3:02 PM Earth to Mission Control....Earth to Mission Control?.....Is there anyone out there?.....Love the brevity of this poem and sudden power loss at the end...Aeronautics is risky business and I salute anyone who takes this on as a career...Enjoyed this clever write. :) gwendolen

Russell Sivey September 9, 2012 at 1:15 PM Ha ha, this is a very clever write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this fabulous poem Jack! I bet you have a lot of fun coming up with this piece, this is something right up your alley is it not? Grandiose write, Great Work!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 9, 2012 at 10:27 AM Good one jack like it xx

Jon A Cavanaugh September 9, 2012 at 9:12 AM i like it. i like the rhyme, i like the subject, i like the brevity, and i like the playfulness of the poem. These are features i love to see in poetry

Apoorva Patrikar September 9, 2012 at 8:28 AM scary! and amazing poetry jack