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Lost In Space

I’m lost in space without you I’m lost in space tonight The viewport is my window My dream of endless flight These stars are not my future Their shine is not my sun My spirit is receding From all the things I won The planet I may land on Is dark without you near The moon is no less barren Without your presence here The journey is my travel To distant parts unknown And all my parts unravel To face them all alone I’m lost in space forever My fuel tank is undone I’m drifting here without you Before a distant sun Please keep me on your radar And memorize my face I’m gone from you but not that far I’m merely lost in space.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 7/25/2021 4:56:00 PM
An excellent poem, and it flows in rhyme beautifully. Congrats on your win! Cheers Anne
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Date: 7/17/2021 12:33:00 PM
Your longing for your lost love is clearly evident in this poem, Bryan! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/16/2021 10:40:00 PM
The planet I may land on Is dark without you near The moon is no less barren Without your presence here Beautiful lines. Congratulations!
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