Lost In Space

I’m lost in space without you
I’m lost in space tonight
The viewport is my window
My dream of endless flight

These stars are not my future
Their shine is not my sun
My spirit is receding
From all the things I won

The planet I may land on
Is dark without you near
The moon is no less barren
Without your presence here

The journey is my travel
To distant parts unknown
And all my parts unravel
To face them all alone

I’m lost in space forever
My fuel tank is undone
I’m drifting here without you
Before a distant sun

Please keep me on your radar
And memorize my face
I’m gone from you but not that far
I’m merely lost in space.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 7/25/2021 4:56:00 PM
An excellent poem, and it flows in rhyme beautifully. Congrats on your win! Cheers Anne
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Date: 7/17/2021 12:33:00 PM
Your longing for your lost love is clearly evident in this poem, Bryan! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/16/2021 10:40:00 PM
The planet I may land on Is dark without you near The moon is no less barren Without your presence here Beautiful lines. Congratulations!
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