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Lost In My Ardent Dreams

Lost in my ardent dreams I bear alone I'd leap into the warm arms of my love Intimate were our kisses, each, our own, While, love lulled sweet amorous feelings of My love; where the rhythm that kept it above All things. Reaching upon each dawn, last grain Whisked away with the sudden cool light rain. My sweethearts last breath I breathed his soul in. I'm consumed with the mournful pain and drain My pen bleeds to write what I feel within. 5/9/2020 Dizain - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Dear Heart

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Constance La France

Date: 5/22/2020 7:42:00 AM

Eve, excellent writing and congratulations on your win in my contest _Constance

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/21/2020 1:39:00 AM

This poignant heartfelt poem makes the heart ache to go backward in time Eve. A beautiful Dizain. Congratulations on your wonderful second place win! Blessings xxoo

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/19/2020 11:54:00 PM

Sad and soothing at the same time. Congratulations on your win Eve :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/19/2020 2:08:00 PM

Dear Eve, you express grieving so poignantly - "my pen bleeds." This makes me think of the song "Love Hurts." Congratulations on your winning placement. Sending you prayers of comfort.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/15/2020 12:21:00 PM

The pain of lost love is so profound, your lines so full of heartbreak - I think it will place high in the contest.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/11/2020 11:40:00 AM

Oh Eve, such a sad write, I can only imagine how hard it is for a loving couple to be separated by death and I can understand how you still mourn him and always will, for if God were to call my husband, I would be desolate! Have strength dear friend, he is your guardian angel until one day when you meet again. Love and hugs Jennifer.