Eve Roper Poet Dizain

Lost In My Ardent Dreams

Lost in  my  ardent  dreams I  bear alone
I'd  leap  into  the warm  arms of my love
Intimate  were  our  kisses, each, our own,
While, love lulled sweet amorous feelings of
My love; where the rhythm that kept it above
All things. Reaching upon each dawn, last grain 
Whisked away with the sudden cool light rain. 
My sweethearts last breath I breathed his soul in. 
I'm consumed with the mournful pain and drain 
My pen bleeds  to  write  what  I  feel  within.


5/9/2020

Dizain - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Dear Heart

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Constance La France May 22, 2020 at 7:42 AM Eve, excellent writing and congratulations on your win in my contest _Constance

Connie Marcum Wong May 21, 2020 at 1:39 AM This poignant heartfelt poem makes the heart ache to go backward in time Eve. A beautiful Dizain. Congratulations on your wonderful second place win! Blessings xxoo

Aditi Mishra May 19, 2020 at 11:54 PM Sad and soothing at the same time. Congratulations on your win Eve :)

Sam Kauffman May 19, 2020 at 2:08 PM Dear Eve, you express grieving so poignantly - "my pen bleeds." This makes me think of the song "Love Hurts." Congratulations on your winning placement. Sending you prayers of comfort.

Michelle Faulkner May 15, 2020 at 12:21 PM The pain of lost love is so profound, your lines so full of heartbreak - I think it will place high in the contest.

Jennifer Proxenos May 11, 2020 at 11:40 AM Oh Eve, such a sad write, I can only imagine how hard it is for a loving couple to be separated by death and I can understand how you still mourn him and always will, for if God were to call my husband, I would be desolate! Have strength dear friend, he is your guardian angel until one day when you meet again. Love and hugs Jennifer.

Eileen Manassian May 11, 2020 at 1:26 AM Eve... your love and longing are clearly felt in these lines. Death cannot steal the memories we hold dear. Sending my love...

Charlie Smith May 9, 2020 at 11:17 AM Write on Dear Eve, best wishes...

Ann Gilmour May 9, 2020 at 7:47 AM Bless you dear Eve, such a heartfelt tribute. Take care of yourself. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Caren Krutsinger May 9, 2020 at 5:58 AM A gorgeous tribute.

Jenish Somadas May 9, 2020 at 3:21 AM My pen bleeds to write what I feel within...Wonderful lines..Great entry..Good luck Eve..