Elaine George Poet Verse

Lost In Dreams of Thee

Awarded FIRST PLACE  in contest sponsored by:  Brian Strand of England
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‘Tis hell,  this place 
Me doth dwell 
Lost in dreams of thee
Drifting 'ore a unquenched wave
Across a never ending sea
From whence that shore
That once appeared before me
So demure
Fie, ’twas but a dream, a dream
A dream, and nothing more

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Andrea Dietrich January 28, 2018 at 9:04 PM I see you got a trophy for this one last year. HOW GREAT, Elaine. A very belated congrats for that!!

Jerome Malenfant October 29, 2016 at 11:01 PM Really nice! Congrats on the win. Elaine George November 1, 2016 at 10:29 PM Thank you, Jerome. Lainey

Connie Marcum Wong October 29, 2016 at 8:52 PM Very lovely Elaine. Congratulations on your fantastic first place trophy! 7 ; ) Elaine George November 1, 2016 at 10:29 PM Thank you for your kind comments, Connie. Lainey

Jerome Malenfant October 29, 2016 at 3:32 PM Wow! Really nice! Elaine George November 1, 2016 at 10:30 PM Thank you so much for your kind comments, Jerome. Lainey

Charlie Smith October 28, 2016 at 9:11 PM Congratulations Elaine, well deserved... Elaine George October 28, 2016 at 9:32 PM Thank you so much, Charlie. Lainey

Cheryl Hoffman October 28, 2016 at 6:41 PM CONGRATS on your great write!:) Elaine George October 28, 2016 at 6:46 PM Thank you, Cheryl. Lainey

Sara Kendrick October 28, 2016 at 4:31 PM Ten lines or less that can be read out loud in the winners’ list is awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Elaine George October 28, 2016 at 6:49 PM Thank you Sara. Lainey.

Sandra Haight October 28, 2016 at 4:08 PM Very lovely, Elaine. Congratulations on your First Place Trophy win! Sandra Elaine George October 28, 2016 at 4:08 PM Thank you so much, Sandra. Lainey

Janis Medders Tobechi October 28, 2016 at 3:03 PM Sounds like unrequited love. Well written. Congratulations on your trophy win. Elaine George October 28, 2016 at 4:00 PM Thank you for your comments, Janis. Lainey

Francis J Grasso October 28, 2016 at 11:18 AM I love this poem! Congratulations for the trophy win, Elaine! Elaine George October 28, 2016 at 4:00 PM Thank you so much for your kind comments, Francis. Lainey

Andrea Dietrich May 25, 2013 at 12:35 AM very cool and reminds of that one poetess. WAs it Ellizabeth barret browing i am thinking of? HOpe I got her name right!!

Caribbean Seawolf May 3, 2012 at 10:21 AM Aye...'tis a wee bit o'salt o'sea doth flow well within thy pen... SeaWolf

Daver Austin October 2, 2011 at 11:58 AM Is this Romeo's dying speech over the (merely sleeping) body of Juliet? Very dramatic and artistic stuff, Lainie. Love, daver March 5, 2012 at 7:28 PM Smile ˜ I Love You Baby!:) *

Ravindra K Kapoor August 24, 2011 at 12:02 PM Excellent and beautifully painted words on Shakespearian style. the Poem is quite moving also. Great job done. I have placed a new Poem on the ongoing mass revolution in India with the link of VIDEO clip I AM TIME which can be seen on my face book page link. I hope you would like it. Love and best wishes...Ravindra

Jack Horne August 5, 2011 at 11:39 AM Beautiful Shakespearian verse, Lainie.

Judy Ball August 1, 2011 at 11:28 PM WoW! Heavens to Willem Shookrear, uh, snakesnear. uh oh you know who I mean. Great job my friend. Loved this. Should be a winner. God Bless, JB

Lee Ramage July 25, 2011 at 10:26 PM Written with only the skill you have. Beautifully done. Love Lee

Elizabeth Wesley July 23, 2011 at 8:43 PM I wish I had that wave here - roasting in this place but we dream of rain and cooler weather. Loved your verse and the thought that goes with it.

Carol Sunshine Brown July 21, 2011 at 7:09 AM It is so hot here in Ohio the last few days and they say stay in if you can. Well I can and so I thought this would be a wonderful day to thank everyone for their kind comments on my poetry. So I say thank you to you for the kind words and for sharing your amazing poetry with us Lainie. Love, Carol

Caryl Ramsdale July 19, 2011 at 5:53 PM Lainie: Pure excellence as usual! Caryl

Don Johnson July 18, 2011 at 4:02 PM Very very good Laine, ol shakenspeare is impressed with ye, looks like a winner to me. xo, Don

Judy Ball July 15, 2011 at 8:40 AM Very, Very well done. An excellent write. God Bless, JB

James Foulk July 11, 2011 at 11:20 AM a great write, well written poem.

Nette Onclaud July 11, 2011 at 8:47 AM lainie... you marked this in such a few words.. i'm so taken by this! winning wishes ot you.. wow! :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 11, 2011 at 8:19 AM thankxx Lainie ..appreciate your warm words today luv..

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