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Lost In Dreams

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Be mine, On this Valentine. red, heart, flowers, All that matters are… The same beat in two hearts quivering, the same blush as the colour of vermilion twilight, the same light agleam eyes locked in intense bond lips thirsty for love… My Valentine, Be mine. rain-clouds from yonder hills drizzle.. whisper dreams, mutter love, a jade waterfall chant sonata, descend, embrace craving rocks with thunderous applause! fluttering trembling.. beating two hearts, locked in dreams, quivering! Be mine! moments with you ~ unforgettable, unbelievable! drenched, soaked, wet entrancing boat-ride journey of a lifetime ~ hands clasped, leaning on each other, two birds cuddled in their nest quivering hearts oblivious~ Be Mine! December 31, 2021 Inspired by "Be Mine" Premiere Poetry Contest Sponsor: Regina McIntosh (N/A) Strand - 1056 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand FIRST PLACE Forever My Love - Valentine Poetry Contest Sponsor: LJ Legros Kelly THIRD PLACE

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/9/2022 11:38:00 AM

I love the way your romantic poem is shaped like flowers. Congratulations on your win Mala. Blessings xxoo

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 2/9/2022 1:30:00 AM

Malabika, thank you for entering your poem in this poetry contest, and congratulations on your winning placement! Happy Valentine's Day!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/21/2022 11:11:00 PM

"rain-clouds from yonder hills drizzle.. whisper dreams, mutter love" - Great poem. Congratulations!

Arjun Jangid

Date: 1/5/2022 7:58:00 AM

Two birds cuddle in their nest, lovely panned.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/9/2022 5:27:00 PM

Thanks, Arjun. Glad you liked the poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/31/2021 2:25:00 PM

- Mala, this was a sweet poem ... love it :) - I wish you and your family a happy new year 2022 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/9/2022 5:26:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. Wish you a wonderful New Year! Love ~ Mala

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/31/2021 1:05:00 PM

A wonderful way to end this year and start next year with love. Happy New with Blessings.................

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/9/2022 5:25:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. You are right - hoping next year to be a better one!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/31/2021 12:40:00 PM

Hello Mala, a very romantic Valentine's day poem. Happy New Year. My friend. Love& Friendship Darlene

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/9/2022 5:24:00 PM

Thanks, Darlene. Happy New Year to You. Love and friendship ~ mala