Lost In Dreams

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Be mine,
                                  On this Valentine.
                                 red, heart, flowers, 
                                 All that matters are…
                            The same beat in two hearts
                             quivering, the same blush
                        as the colour of vermilion twilight,
                             the same light agleam eyes
                                locked in intense bond
                                  lips thirsty for love…
                                      My Valentine,
                                         Be mine.

                                        rain-clouds
                               from yonder hills drizzle.. 
                            whisper dreams, mutter love, 
                            a jade waterfall chant sonata, 
                          descend, embrace craving rocks 
                              with thunderous applause! 
                                   fluttering trembling..
                                   beating two hearts, 
                                    locked in dreams,
                                          quivering!
                                           Be mine!

                                     moments with you ~
                               unforgettable, unbelievable!
                                 drenched, soaked, wet 
                                   entrancing boat-ride
                                   journey of a lifetime ~
                                  hands clasped, leaning 
                                  on each other, two birds
                                    cuddled in their nest
                                       quivering hearts
                                            oblivious~
                                             Be Mine! 


                                     December 31, 2021
                     Inspired by "Be Mine" Premiere Poetry Contest
                                 Sponsor: Regina McIntosh (N/A)

                                Strand - 1056 Poetry Contest
                                   Sponsor: Brian Strand
                                        FIRST  PLACE

                       Forever My Love - Valentine Poetry Contest
                                      Sponsor: LJ Legros Kelly
                                           THIRD PLACE

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 2/9/2022 11:38:00 AM
I love the way your romantic poem is shaped like flowers. Congratulations on your win Mala. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/9/2022 1:30:00 AM
Malabika, thank you for entering your poem in this poetry contest, and congratulations on your winning placement! Happy Valentine's Day!
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Date: 1/21/2022 11:11:00 PM
"rain-clouds from yonder hills drizzle.. whisper dreams, mutter love" - Great poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/5/2022 7:58:00 AM
Two birds cuddle in their nest, lovely panned.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/9/2022 5:27:00 PM
Thanks, Arjun. Glad you liked the poem.
Date: 12/31/2021 2:25:00 PM
- Mala, this was a sweet poem ... love it :) - I wish you and your family a happy new year 2022 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/9/2022 5:26:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. Wish you a wonderful New Year! Love ~ Mala
Date: 12/31/2021 1:05:00 PM
A wonderful way to end this year and start next year with love. Happy New with Blessings.................
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/9/2022 5:25:00 PM
Thank you, Paula. You are right - hoping next year to be a better one!
Date: 12/31/2021 12:40:00 PM
Hello Mala, a very romantic Valentine's day poem. Happy New Year. My friend. Love& Friendship Darlene
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/9/2022 5:24:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene. Happy New Year to You. Love and friendship ~ mala
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