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Lost in Cyberspace

That'll teach me Or will it? Penned a poem with the keyboard Dumb move, I admit it. You're not going to get me I tapped back in And my words Disappeared again Oh, that's a sin. Poor poet on line Why dost thou insist On leaving your pen behind When you know It is a risk? They were tapping back at me As if they knew the rules And then I hit that key And finally lost my cool.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/16/2009 7:50:00 AM
This is an excellent, wonderful piece, you are a wonderful poet I love the flow of words… please keep the flag flying and congratulations on a well deserved feature of the week. You are great friend!. Adeleke
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Date: 8/11/2009 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 8/10/2009 5:05:00 AM
Karen - I wish to congratulate you on having your poetry featured this week – God bless you, MJ
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Date: 8/10/2009 4:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Karen. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2009 12:58:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured, Karen. Make a back up WHILE composing. Save often. Use microsoft word or something. Then, you can keep your cool...Been there... sadly. Keep writing! DAS-J
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Date: 8/9/2009 12:36:00 PM
Interesting perspective. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 4/20/2009 12:42:00 AM
It's happened to me several times...Raul
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Date: 2/9/2009 3:07:00 PM
Never been very successful without rewrites myself ... LOL ... enjoyed this one, Karen!!
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Date: 10/2/2008 2:52:00 PM
You paint pictures in my mind and no longer fear the pen that is my sword.Blessed be. Bellantony
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Date: 9/14/2008 11:07:00 AM
it's a sin against the pen. don't do it again! john
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