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Lost In Comfort

Lost in comfort, to forget about you, hidden away are the tears I cried. Snuggled within the folds and softness, of an old worn throw, with fringe tied. Silken threads of russet, slide through, my thoughtful fingers, one by one. Each thread becomes a memory of you when after all is said and done. For the contest: A 1 to 8 lines Placement: 1st

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/8/2011 7:11:00 PM
I really like this one, paula. I can see how it got a first place. I came looking for recent winners and came instead upon this older contest on the page where he told us to look for yesterday's winners. But I am sure enjoying THIS list.
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Date: 6/29/2011 4:42:00 AM
Congratulations Paula on your win in the contest sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 3:29:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this very expressive work..Sara
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Date: 6/27/2011 10:08:00 PM
A MASTERPIECE, Paula. Many congrats on your FIRST PLACE WIN. Lainie
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Date: 6/27/2011 7:45:00 PM
good luck in the contest. you wont believe my last two pieces. john
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Date: 6/26/2011 5:40:00 PM
" Silken threads of russet' slide through...." what a lovely line. Should be on the winners list. BG
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