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Lost In Autumn's Goodbye Premiere Contest Winner

The stunning scarlet leaf flows with gentle fervor. Freedom requires a depth of beauty for nature's relinquished desires. There seems to be a dynamic image brought forth from the soft breeze that whispers dainty goodbyes. For our love is gone and so is the memory of the barren branches from our favorite sapling. I knew not of love before you, only of the heartache that Autumn bestows. I needed you like a breath of fresh air; you lost me in the wind. -delicate crimson… Date Written: July 25, 2016

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Date: 9/18/2018 1:29:00 PM
Congrats Laura on your 1st place win!
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Date: 9/18/2018 12:59:00 PM
Lovely, Laura. Congrats on your gold medal win.
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Date: 11/9/2017 10:33:00 PM
Gorgeous write, Laura, and so expressive ... Autumn always reminds me of my first true love, and always will, and that's why I love, (and fear), it so. Congratulations on this fine win! :-) <3
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Date: 10/6/2016 1:29:00 PM
Definitely stunning, I see why it won!
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Date: 10/5/2016 4:27:00 PM
In less than ten lines you have created magic with this winner…Way to go poet friend..Congrats on you being in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 10/4/2016 5:33:00 AM
This is such a meaningful write, Laura. Congrats on your top win! ;)
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Date: 10/4/2016 7:32:00 AM
Thank you sweet Moon Flower :)-luloo
Date: 10/4/2016 3:39:00 AM
Very pretty write. Congratulations on a trophy win, Laura! ...Fran
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Date: 10/4/2016 7:31:00 AM
Thank you Fran :)-luloo
Date: 10/3/2016 12:23:00 PM
Lovely depiction of love and nature. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/4/2016 7:30:00 AM
Thank you sweet Sarita:)--luloo
Date: 10/3/2016 8:14:00 AM
Congrats on your top win Laura
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/4/2016 7:29:00 AM
Thank you sweet Joseph :)-luloo
Date: 10/2/2016 10:21:00 PM
Fabulous poem, Laura. Congratulations on your great win.
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Date: 10/3/2016 2:44:00 AM
thank you Afzal :)-luloo
Date: 10/2/2016 7:37:00 PM
stunning indeed...the leaf and your writing :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/2/2016 8:14:00 PM
thank you dear David :)-luloo
Date: 10/2/2016 7:13:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your Trophy First Place win for your lovely poem. Hugs, Sandra
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/2/2016 8:13:00 PM
thank you sweet Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 10/2/2016 6:57:00 PM
Congratulations Laura...loved your write.
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/2/2016 8:13:00 PM
thank you lovely Meenakshi :)-luloo
Date: 10/2/2016 6:46:00 PM
But, but, it doesn't rhyme! :) This is tremendously done. I love the last line - I may need to borrow it for one of my guilt-trip sonnets, it's a powerful conclusion to a passionate write.
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Date: 10/2/2016 8:12:00 PM
thanks Phillip-you'e so silly :)-luloo
Date: 10/2/2016 6:33:00 PM
Lovely, free flowing verse. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/2/2016 8:12:00 PM
thank you sweet Janis :)-luloo
Date: 10/2/2016 5:52:00 PM
I didn't know it was you........CONGRATS WOW- Love-It
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/2/2016 8:11:00 PM
thank you so much Rick :) I am honored :)-luloo
Date: 7/26/2016 4:58:00 AM
Delicate images. Sometimes the wind changes direction.
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/3/2016 2:48:00 AM
you are right! thank you :)-luloo
Date: 7/25/2016 5:58:00 PM
wow, THIS rocks, Laura!!! It's very poetic in the way it symbolizes so many things from nature. BIG SEVEN
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/25/2016 6:36:00 PM
awww thank you lovely Andrea, you are always so sweet to me :)-luloo

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