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Lost In a Dream

lost in a winter dream~ beneath the indigo sky the melancholic music soars echoing from distant shores making dainty daffodils dance in the bleak starlit eve. snowflakes whitened my hair as I chase the evening glow searching where the melodies flow and there I find you under the moonlight shadow singing my old favourite song while stardust sprinkles in my palms as I run to you. 20 February 2021 Notes: While listening to Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart's Piano Concerto No. 21 - Andante. All Yours( Feb 19) Poetry Contest Sponsored by Briand Strand 1st place

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Date: 3/6/2022 8:12:00 AM
What an enchanting piece of a poem . I am not surprised that this has bagged a first place. I like the image of snowflakes whitening your hair. As you chase the trail of music, you find her ! A romantic dream !
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Date: 7/21/2021 3:56:00 AM
I love where you find your endless source of inspiration ~ paying tribute to greats and sharing with us the double benefit of both yours and their creativity and beauty.
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Date: 2/22/2021 3:13:00 PM
back to fave this one.
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Date: 2/22/2021 3:03:00 PM
This is SO gorgeous. And I see it's got a win with Brian. BIG congrats.
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Date: 2/21/2021 2:24:00 PM
Congratulations, JCB. You are musically talented, which is reflected in your poetic piece. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 2/20/2021 1:13:00 PM
Beautiful poem, JCB. My favorite line, "while stardust sprinkles in my palms" :)
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Date: 2/20/2021 8:49:00 AM
JCB, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this wonderfully penned poem _Constance
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Date: 2/19/2021 11:33:00 PM
Lovely write JCB....I was lost in your dream poem....Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 2/19/2021 10:17:00 AM
- Sometimes we need to dream us a long way ... with music in a background ... a lovely poem, JCB :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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