Lost Identity

When they ask me
"Who are you?"
I seem to draw a blank
I dont know how to answer
And I dont know what to think
I try to come up with something
But there are no words to describe
The way I feel meaningless to this world
Like a sail boat is meaningless to kansas
I feel lost and confused
Not sure what it is im supposed to do 
I have my reasons to feel this way
Yet I cant name one
I feel like Im suffocating
In this world
With no purpose in life
No direction
And no understanding of who I really am
I try to speak my mind 
but no words come out
I want to tell them who I want to be
But that doesnt answer the question
I dont know who I am 
And I dont know if I ever will
So when they ask me
"Who are you?"
I tell them 
"I dont know"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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December 20, 2016 at 3:49 PM
Felicity, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) HAPPY HOLIDAYS. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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December 14, 2016 at 9:53 AM
You are a poem,yet to be written, a song yet to be sung, you are a young woman fulfilling her destiny, Felicity:)
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December 14, 2016 at 8:22 AM
So sad. Expressed well in writing. May you find yourself and your voice :)
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