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Lost Identity

*Author's note. Just my interpretation on what I think would happen to me if I were to start telling lies. I once told a lie Which led to one after another Being told And before I knew it I was lost in my lies I'd wake up in the morning Look at myself in the mirror And see a stranger, Wearing my clothes There began to be truth in my lies And lies in my truth The two had become connected And intertwined so tightly That I had lost sight of who I was Somehow, somewhere Lost in my lies, I'd lost my identity.

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Theodora Sterling

Date: 8/6/2016 5:09:00 PM

Hugs.

David Smith

Date: 7/14/2016 8:36:00 PM

Top class. Identity theft is rife mate. Try this new Kiwi Superglue. Glad you are keeping up with me on the new poet ladder. Give you a seven to get you to the top so I can bring my ego down. Not a mates rate. Funny how we keep ending up on the podium together. Although Hillary from .... gave us advantage in mountain climbing. We share all our best things with our neighbours including our pavlova. Great poem, words used to good effect. David from . . .

D.A Hopkins

Date: 7/13/2016 3:21:00 AM

I just have to put this out and as you are an Aussie I do believe that you will take it in and if you choose not to use my comment don't worry I will not die on the spot. I believe that everyone has different taste and styles. I do hope that you start to calm down on the use of 'oft' I think this word is a less is more word and I have had the guides off worrying about bigger words when a simpler word will flow. access you work to more people this way. email if you have a stronger need of help.

Caleb Lawrence
Date: 7/14/2016 12:34:00 AM

I'm actually a Kiwi. I just live in Australia xD But thanks for the tip. I simply like how oft sounds when I say it in my head as opposed to often. But I shall take your words into consideration and shall try to use more varied words in my future poems. Thank you and have a good day :)