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Lost Horizon

Lost Horizon I streaked right by the sunset, never noticed the tangerine sphere in the sky, the orange ball of which poets speak. Into the darkness I stumbled. What happened? Self-absorption obscured the sign of the sun. Kathryn McLoughlin Collins May 28, 2013

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Date: 6/24/2013 5:20:00 PM
Your regular use of 's' words gives the piece a sibilant feel. So well conceived and rendered. BRAVO YOU!! Love, (and a hug) Keith
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Date: 6/5/2013 9:33:00 AM
I hope you stumbled into Shangri La. Love, daver
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Date: 5/29/2013 4:20:00 PM
Well..that happens sometimes doesn't it? We just need to slow down....xxoo Holly Moore
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Date: 5/28/2013 3:23:00 PM
Very nice poem.Enjoyed the read.Thanks for reading so many of my poems .
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Date: 5/28/2013 2:03:00 PM
Introspection... a solar eclipse... with luck or patience, it will reappear... Love, Terry
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