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Lost Control

How many times have I thought Of reaching for the phone I’ve given you my heart But you conquered my mind I’m in a quasi state of trance I live only for our moments together I merely survive from a meeting to the next It’s totally out of perspective I no longer have control How can I be so foolish I must be falling in love How can I be so blind I have so very fallen in love AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on February 2, 2019 for contest EARLY FEBRUARY 2019 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Originally posted in March, 2018

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Gary Smith

Date: 2/4/2019 8:33:00 AM

Excellent Line, congrats. :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/4/2019 8:47:00 AM

Thanks, Gary.

Fj Thomas

Date: 3/19/2018 3:44:00 PM

Pretty much how I remember it being. Perfectly written Line :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/19/2018 9:31:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and comment, FJ. Much appreciated.

Robertina B.

Date: 3/18/2018 8:49:00 PM

So very true Line.. Well done! Enjoyed reading ..

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/18/2018 8:56:00 PM

Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Robertina.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/18/2018 6:38:00 PM

Oh how we've all been affected by that thing called love. We can't resist it and it weakens us. Tom

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/18/2018 7:08:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Tom.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/18/2018 5:31:00 PM

romance is in the air, line... very fine poem from the heart... huggs

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/18/2018 7:07:00 PM

Thank you so much for your visit and comment, nette.

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/18/2018 5:16:00 PM

Wow, awesome feeling, you write it so well.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/18/2018 7:07:00 PM

This is one of my older poems thankfully. I'm very happy being old newlyweds - 10 years this year - honeymoon till the end. Thanks for your visit, Harry.