Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

Lost Control

How many times have I thought
Of reaching for the phone
I’ve given you my heart
But you conquered my mind

I’m in a quasi state of trance
I live only for our moments together
I merely survive from a meeting to the next
It’s totally out of perspective

I no longer have control
How can I be so foolish
I must be falling in love
How can I be so blind
I have so very fallen in love



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on February 2, 2019 for contest EARLY FEBRUARY 2019 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Gary Smith February 4, 2019 at 8:33 AM Excellent Line, congrats. :) Line Gauthier February 4, 2019 at 8:47 AM Thanks, Gary.

FJ Thomas March 19, 2018 at 3:44 PM Pretty much how I remember it being. Perfectly written Line :) Line Gauthier March 19, 2018 at 9:31 PM Thank you for your visit and comment, FJ. Much appreciated.

Robertina B. March 18, 2018 at 8:49 PM So very true Line.. Well done! Enjoyed reading .. Line Gauthier March 18, 2018 at 8:56 PM Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Robertina.

Tom Cunningham March 18, 2018 at 6:38 PM Oh how we've all been affected by that thing called love. We can't resist it and it weakens us. Tom Line Gauthier March 18, 2018 at 7:08 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Tom.

Nette Onclaud March 18, 2018 at 5:31 PM romance is in the air, line... very fine poem from the heart... huggs Line Gauthier March 18, 2018 at 7:07 PM Thank you so much for your visit and comment, nette.

Harry Horsman March 18, 2018 at 5:16 PM Wow, awesome feeling, you write it so well. Line Gauthier March 18, 2018 at 7:07 PM This is one of my older poems thankfully. I'm very happy being old newlyweds - 10 years this year - honeymoon till the end. Thanks for your visit, Harry.