Lost Boys

Little boy lost in echoes of his past.
Not knowing though never forgetting.
In things that linger in memories unspoken.
Lost and alone always foreboding thoughts.
Dreams of nightmares scattered across his mind.
Colors are always dark and muted in a fog.
So many drugs on this lost highway.
Some days were filled with blue skies.
Most often than not colors of gray muted walls.
Bruises were a constant on wrists and ankles.
There is always that sinking feeling rising up.
Words and memories flashed through his mind.
It is a place of control except for no control at all.
It is free reign here to do what is pleasing for some.
The mind can take you away from places you can't deal with.
He locked away secrets, deep inside, as he tried to forget.
As he watched the paintings on the wall changing forms.
As they took him places he longed to be, to forget things.
He did not want to see, dreams of nightmares and evil things.
As this boy never understood bringing to near death.
 When the song of the holy rang out in his ears.
He thought he had nothing in this life to fear. 
And in the end, this lost boy slipped off to heaven.
Never to be seen again, with anyone to cry for him.
 




3 am  3/ 24/ 2012    I took the liberty of putting 3- 4 stories in one poem/ my X was a cop, and he told me a few stories of him & his team rescuing those boys.
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Barry-Nishanian Avatar
July 17, 2019 at 12:10 AM
Debbie, sorry just noticed you commented on my poem on this subject, and wanted to run over and read your thoughts. Thought of cuffed wrist and ankles, says it all. I've been influenced by Criminal minds as I mentioned. You did great!
Imtiaz Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 5:54 AM
hi Debbie i like your poem very much. and it seems to be a real story. "He locked away secrets, deep inside, as he tried to forget. As he watched the paintings on the wall changing forms. As they took him places he longed to be, to forget things. He did not want to see, dreams of nightmares and evil things."
Deschler Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 9:40 PM
Fantastic poem! Very emotional and dramatic. I love it! You are a very talented poet. You are quickly becoming a favorite of mine, as well!
Duncan Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 10:09 PM
Thank you very much Kelly ;}
Kearley Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 12:04 AM
This really hit home for me...I felt you were writing about me for a sec.. Ha-ha :o) Very nice
Duncan Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 12:46 AM
Thank you Dan ;}
Johnson Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 2:25 AM
yes the suffering we as people endure? is there some meaning or logic in the suffering ...Napoleans people killed millions and a hundred years later the French suffered through 2 nasty world wars......
A   Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 4:37 PM
Hello Debbie :-) hope you are well.. Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda
Jones Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 9:18 PM
Masterfully crafted truth Debbie...one close to my heart....
Duncan Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 9:31 PM
thank you Donna ;}
A   Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 5:13 PM
wow, I love the opening line DEBBIE :-) Little boy lost in echoes of his past. ** I know these stories are told by your x- hubby, but they are sad, and leave a very lonely and sad imagery. Almost like that song from *THE RIGHTEOUS BROTHERS* "Unchained Melodies"... very sad... the ending draws the deepest tears.... always~ Linda
Duncan Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 5:34 PM
yes, pedophiles need to be dead .
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 10:14 AM
just stopping by to say hi. Wish I had more time and I would explore your oldies and see if you had one I've not read yet!
Duncan Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 3:13 PM
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Kendrick Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 8:52 AM
Very emotive and expressive..There needs to be some kind of system in place to rescue children when they are very young from bad situations..I know that someone somewhere has the intellect to implement a program to do this..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Duncan Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 1:43 PM
very true Sara,
Anglesey Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 10:09 AM
WOW. Powerful and haunting with amazing talent.
Duncan Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 10:38 AM
thank you Karen ;}
Beaufort Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 5:32 PM
You have captured the spirit of what I would imagine heaven would be like if I believed in it. Anyway--you have a kind heart. You are so very thoughtful and interested in everything. Love your work.
Duncan Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 11:05 PM
thank you Duke ;}
Colasurdo Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 4:14 PM
Nicely done Debbie, sad but beautifully written. Thanks for stopping by...Hugs
Duncan Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 12:47 AM
thank you ;}
Mitchell Jr. Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 12:39 PM
Very deeply written my friend, makes me ponder a whole lot. Good write.
May Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 10:46 AM
a sad and touching write Debbie....thank you for stopping by...best wishes
Komala Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 10:30 AM
Very touching write dearest Debbie <3 wishing you a blessed day <3 luv and lights <3 SK
Duncan Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 10:56 AM
you have a blessed day too ;}
Posey Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 7:59 PM
Debbie, the way you just reach in and tear out pieces of my heart speaks of talent most of us just dream about..... Well done.... Jake
Duncan Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 8:46 PM
thank you Jake ;}
Johnson Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 2:59 PM
Well I wrote a pretty good rhyming comment here but accidently hit the escape button and lost it. Peace and Prayers. :)
Duncan Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 8:45 PM
Peace ;}
La France Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 9:55 AM
Debbie, your poem is sadly beautiful, the writing perfection, so filled with emotions, you captured the essence of those lost boys, children, all people with no one to cry for them, constance
Duncan Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 8:15 PM
thank you ;}
Dietrich Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 1:16 AM
So sad. very poignant writing. the title made me think of Peter Pan's little crew but they were much more fortunate in the end!
Duncan Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 5:06 PM
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Dunn Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 4:43 PM
Spooky write sad also but very well done thank you for sharing.
Duncan Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 7:02 PM
thank you for reading ;}
Horsman Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 12:22 PM
The fact you have been able to blend this so well together,, makes for wonderful poetry,,,just love this poem,,,
Duncan Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 1:25 PM
thank you harry ;},,, sad though.
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 11:58 AM
- One who "fall between the cracks" - part of "no man's land" - deep, sad and very well written Debbie. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Duncan Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 1:25 PM
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