William Kelii Kekaula Poet Rhyme

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Poetic Form: Rhyme

Inspired: 2023 October 01

Image: Life Path by MindEasy

Lost At Sea

A placid dose abducts barren perceptions,
wherefore virtue departs in the nakedness
stretch passionately, dawning motivations,
transcendent intrinsic structuring success.
Epic fuse a star--at sea--sunk translations.

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Linda Alice Fowler October 11, 2023 at 2:46 PM Great last line Dearest William. The photo is breathtaking. :) William Kelii Kekaula October 11, 2023 at 4:53 PM A day light up and dreams are lost for the waken. Aloha, William!

Kim Rodrigues October 2, 2023 at 5:34 AM virtue departs in the nakedness… a star--at sea--sinks translation/ Interesting title, William! Aloha! William Kelii Kekaula October 2, 2023 at 6:56 AM I'm grateful, Kim, for your highlights and noting my play on words for seasickness pills for an assured rest at sea. Mahalo, William

Eve Roper October 1, 2023 at 11:09 PM Beautiful poem. love the photo so very striking. A storm it sails through with faith to a calm. William Kelii Kekaula October 1, 2023 at 11:19 PM Blessings indeed, Eve--a word played on 'Dramamine' for seasickness--for your insightful sharing! Mahalo, William