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Poetic Form: Rhyme

Inspired: 2023 October 01

Image: Life Path by MindEasy

Pin de Wlsghk en ?? en 2023 | Lineas decorativas, Marcos para texto, Dibujos de labios

A placid dose abducts barren perceptions, wherefore virtue departs in the nakedness stretch passionately, dawning motivations, transcendent intrinsic structuring success. Epic fuse a star--at sea--sunk translations.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 10/11/2023 2:46:00 PM
Great last line Dearest William. The photo is breathtaking. :)
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Date: 10/11/2023 4:53:00 PM
A day light up and dreams are lost for the waken. Aloha, William!
Date: 10/2/2023 5:34:00 AM
virtue departs in the nakedness… a star--at sea--sinks translation/ Interesting title, William! Aloha!
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Date: 10/2/2023 6:56:00 AM
I'm grateful, Kim, for your highlights and noting my play on words for seasickness pills for an assured rest at sea. Mahalo, William
Date: 10/1/2023 11:09:00 PM
Beautiful poem. love the photo so very striking. A storm it sails through with faith to a calm.
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Date: 10/1/2023 11:19:00 PM
Blessings indeed, Eve--a word played on 'Dramamine' for seasickness--for your insightful sharing! Mahalo, William

Book: Shattered Sighs