Lost As a Feather,Follow the Pretty Beads

Lost as a feather,follow the pretty beads  ,                                                                         
    Lost as the feather of a raven,I walk myself across the empty court yard,

Where I come across an occasional mound of fresh dirt not quite marked,

They seem as lost as I am,I look for her decor,as I had done the week before,

Even then I wondered why a raven would circle on this hottest of days,shadowing through the leafless trees,

My tears subside-not like the sweat ,which rolls down my face onto the crackled ground,

I stand dividing the past and the future,shadows are cast when the raven passes ,giving off an instant of the truth ,

 Why do I seek the call of the Raven,while searching for my friend,Who has left, joining the rest- dancing on cloud nine,  I am as lost as the feather there on the ground near where I ‘m sure her body lays.

There are a few pretty beads left behind,as though she had left a trail to where she had gone.

.                                -Dedicated to Lynn Summers who passed away here lately 8-1-2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/4/2012 6:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Frank's "A Summer Memory" contest Ricky. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/30/2012 12:11:00 PM
A fine poem dedicaed to your lost friend. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/29/2012 6:16:00 AM
very enchating but heart felt write....congrats on the contest placement.......~sashi
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