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LOST AND FOUND ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
When all words have been written, the pen feels heavy, leaden weight in my weary hand. Inspiration, a silent bird, takes flight, a flash of iridescent wings disappearing beyond the horizon. Imagination, a child lost in a funhouse, caught in a repetitious loop of familiar shapes, trapped in distorted, mirrored halls. Then, a door appears, not one of wood or metal, but one of starlight and whispers, polished smooth by yearning and passion. I open it, and the world explodes with colors unseen and sounds unheard, with endless possibilities. My senses ignite; every cell comes alive; and inspiration, no longer silent,

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Date: 9/10/2025 5:31:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, Sara ~ The last stanza is 2 lines ending with a comma ~ makes me wonder if you intended to add to it...
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/10/2025 5:33:00 PM
good point about the commas...just a misstep on my part. Thanks for visiting and commenting, Sara
Date: 9/10/2025 11:24:00 AM
A bountiful harvest from God's hand. You clearly value that present, too. Best wishes forever. A delightful poem that beautifully depicts how creativity works.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/10/2025 5:34:00 PM
awww, thank you for your positive comments and wishes...you made my evening :-) appreciate your visit, Texas hugs, Sara
Date: 9/10/2025 8:05:00 AM
Amen Sara, the Lord gives great bounty And I see you appreciate that gift.' All blessings allways.'
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/10/2025 5:35:00 PM
thanks, Joe, for visiting...and yes, I appreciate the bounty given so freely...have a blessed evening
Date: 9/10/2025 6:36:00 AM
"My senses ignite; every cell comes alive; and inspiration, no longer silent," -- wonderful read, highlighting the creative process. Starts early in life, why parents should encourage. Wonder if God felt the same way? His first flower, mountain and see. Was he drowsy when it came to humans?:))
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Date: 9/10/2025 5:36:00 PM
thanks for your enthusiastic comments and your thought provoking words. Perhaps God was drowsy when creating humans... :-) made me smile...have a blessed evening, Sara
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