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Traces of destruction. Echo upon faces of construction. While interstates explode. Swans implode. Others cry out in rage. Trapped like frightened bears in a cage. Numbers, ah how they rejoice. When echos find their voice. Temples crack and fall. Smoke ascends and surrounds us all. We are Lost

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/9/2010 7:14:00 PM
Surrealism?
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Date: 2/6/2010 3:48:00 PM
oh, I just found out this won a contest. Congratulations!!
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Date: 2/6/2010 3:16:00 PM
daniel did anyone tell you yet how to post soup mail? Just go to Mac's poems and see at the top of YOUR mail the little bowl of hot soup by your name? That is soup mail,then when you see that same bowl by Mac's name, send him your request. I was number 5, so I think you have time to get in. (btw, I totally agree with the last line of your poem here, we ARE lost) LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/6/2010 2:54:00 PM
hmmm I hope not... an end scenerio! shiver congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 2/6/2010 2:36:00 PM
To send Soupmail you go to one of Mac's poems. Beside his name on the poem there is a little soupbowl click on it and it will take you to his Soupmail. Hope you get this in time to enter the contest. Love Carol
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Date: 2/6/2010 1:52:00 PM
Well expressed!
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Date: 2/6/2010 1:30:00 PM
Hi .. me again.. forgot the best part.. congrats on your winning poem in Mac's contest yesterday.. I see u were up after all to enter... all these time differences to be aware of to enter... makes it more interesting ... wonderful write.. Daniel.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/6/2010 1:08:00 PM
Hi Daniel: don't know if anyone sent u instructions on how to soup mail another poet but look up at the top of your poem on this page.. the little icon next to your name is the soup mail icon... so go to Mac's list of poems..click on one of his poems... when the page comes up scroll up to the icon and click it.. soup mail page appears for u to type.. OK?.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 2/6/2010 12:20:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme to share your thoughts. Congratulations on your fourth place finish in Mar's contest. Keep on writing! Enjoy your success. Karen
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Date: 2/6/2010 11:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Mac's contest Daniel. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/5/2010 7:11:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem tonight...Marty
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Date: 2/5/2010 4:43:00 PM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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