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time has taken hold your once rippling pools of blue are empty craters

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Date: 2/14/2025 1:51:00 PM
Wow, interesting and creative imagery!
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Date: 2/14/2025 8:40:00 AM
Well written and a sad situation. Age and time took its toll.
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