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I can’t remember myself I’m lost in the attraction the bleeding need the dirty impolite hunger make me somehow matter soap me with important gifts drape me brilliant feathers curves that bedevil make me pretty to him

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Date: 6/19/2023 2:46:00 AM
It is what is in your heart that makes you matter to others and if your heart is true then you will always appear beautiful no matter how you look. (John’s philosophical BS for the day) Hope you are having a great summer!
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Date: 6/18/2023 9:23:00 AM
Excellent poem. The transfer of emotion was achieved. This is all a poem should do.
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Anais Vionet
Date: 6/18/2023 3:31:00 PM
thank you!

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