Lost

Her gaze took my breath With beauty that melts the heart And kindness within Thankfulness washed over me And I was lost in her eyes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Faulkner Avatar
November 3, 2021 at 6:03 PM
I like the unique take on 'thanksgiving' - sweet and romantic, hope it's a winner for you~
Chunn Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 6:58 PM
Thank you Michelle....most appreciated.
Daniel Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 1:27 AM
Lovely one, Andy:) well penned:)
Ebbs Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 6:32 PM
Nicely structured, adaptable to many situations. Thank you for sharing :)
Chunn Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 6:54 PM
Thank you Edward. Your Thanksgiving tanka was also very nice. "Thankful for all we cherish".....that says it all.
Achara Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 6:25 PM
Beautiful and beautifully written.
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